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Misc => The Lounge => Topic started by: ..::HHH::.. on January 05, 2007, 09:46:32 pm

Title: My Story.. (poem again)
Post by: ..::HHH::.. on January 05, 2007, 09:46:32 pm

sorry for the misspelling and such..
what do you think?:p

Title: Re: My Story.. (poem again)
Post by: a-4-year-old on January 05, 2007, 10:02:56 pm

I am no master poet, but I liked it for the most part.

you should probably change the ending a bit though, because poems follow a pattern, for example, the first line rhymes with the third line in the beginning, and at the end, the first line rhymes with the second line. other then that, use spellcheck.

Title: Re: My Story.. (poem again)
Post by: Smegma on January 05, 2007, 10:37:26 pm

To be blunt, I really dislike it.