need homework help

[Red Neck]

since im not a poet i was wondering if someone here could help me make a 6 line love poem for english

[Nfsjunkie91]

This is a forums board, not a homework help line.

[Graham]

Nsf... that was mean... {Edit} Ahh found it, if you don't like this one(which is more then 6 lines) I may be able to slap one together quick.

Sand

How can you be so near yet so far
Loving you is like catching a falling star

By you forever I stand
As you slip past me like grains of sand

As time goes on
I still can't call you my own

I cannot bear to leave your side
Yet my love I still hide

O God why must I have this curse
As my love grows, my fears get worse

To be near you is both pleasure and pain
And to loose you is both a great loss and great gain


Also spam by Milkman Dan and 101 deleted.

[Nfsjunkie91]

Nsf...

I'm not the National Science Foundation!

I'm just getting annoyed with people who want help with homework.

[Red Neck]

eh if you dont like it then dont read the posts asking for a little help

also my teacher limited to six lines and there is a bunch of other things needed in it such as 2 forms of alliteration an internal rhyme  2 forms of consonance 2 forms of onomanapea(spelling?) and one form of near rhyme. i hope this isnt to much but its the guide lines she gave us

[Raithah]

This is called 'plagarism'. And it is bad

"Please recall that plagarism is bad, class," spoke our teacher, "If I catch you plagarising I'll hold you back for the next two years. And yes Jimmy, I can and will do that.".

[Graham]

eh if you dont like it then dont read the posts asking for a little help

also my teacher limited to six lines and there is a bunch of other things needed in it such as 2 forms of alliteration an internal rhyme  2 forms of consonance 2 forms of onomanapea(spelling?) and one form of near rhyme. i hope this isnt to much but its the guide lines she gave us

We aren't doing it all for you, Ill be happy to give a poem or two but asking that much is stupid. You are in school to learn bubba.

[Red Neck]

what i meant was ideas i was just telling all the substance that i need to put in it thats all sorry t

[Graham]

Ideas are all around you.. just gotta know how to look. Take this for instance: everyday I ran on a dirt road that lead to me house(until I changed my route) on that road a small thorny vine would brush against my neck. I wondered about why it was there and such and came out with an idea the size of a novel.... writing is something you just gotta step back and take a look at the world around you(Yes I even took school writing assignments seriouly) Anyway if you need any hands-on help I will pm you my msn.

[Commander Kitsune]

I did all of that sruff in 7th grade. . And I was an idiot back then. Surely you can do it.

[Red Neck]

alright then thx t, and im a f*cking idiot in english but i like to code and am learing how to do it