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Offline nittythefreak

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First map - small castle
« on: June 17, 2007, 08:17:26 pm »
Ok, here goes, made this last night, it sucks and is too small but i wanted a little castle for small 2v2 dm

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as requested , no more blinding red background
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added a lot of shading, clouds, stars, black background, tidied up the bottom and made it a bit nicer,
« Last Edit: June 18, 2007, 05:51:55 pm by nittythefreak »

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Re: First map - small castle
« Reply #1 on: June 17, 2007, 08:29:49 pm »
The background makes the map look horrible, please change it.  The map also a little more needs some shading.  The layout of the map isn't very suitable for deathmatch, I'd reconmend changing it to infiltration.  Overall, it isn't bad.
« Last Edit: June 17, 2007, 08:31:34 pm by The Specialist »

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Re: First map - small castle
« Reply #2 on: June 18, 2007, 07:40:27 am »
Very nice map for the first one...But keep up workin on that! It has very much potencial!
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Re: First map - small castle
« Reply #3 on: June 18, 2007, 07:42:52 am »
Wow, nice to be a first map

i don't like the background, put a dack one, like in the night, an add stars :D

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Re: First map - small castle
« Reply #4 on: June 18, 2007, 09:25:54 pm »
The background does look better than before.  But this time, make the background a little less dense in darkness.  And nice job on the shading, you almost got it right.

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Re: First map - small castle
« Reply #5 on: June 19, 2007, 07:14:44 pm »
wow I love the 2nd version way better than the 1st lol
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Re: First map - small castle
« Reply #6 on: June 25, 2007, 12:08:40 pm »
Nice one, scenery and background, stars, castle, shades, all in general are nice. But it's like an Infiltration map, not a Dm  ;D Good job!

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Re: First map - small castle
« Reply #7 on: June 25, 2007, 12:39:59 pm »
I love the aurora-like clouds. I must say that I would change it to infiltration though, but it's amazing for a first map. Just keep improving it and maybe we'll see it in a inf server one day

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Re: First map - small castle
« Reply #8 on: June 25, 2007, 02:45:10 pm »
It'd be pretty cool as infiltration, having to infiltrate the castle. What I'd do for a medeival castle look instead would be to have the moat, but to have the bridge lead up to castle walls with a gatehouse, have a fair sized courtyard with a couple small towers and houses or somethin, then to have the big ol' castle.

Looks nice right now as is. Good for it being a "first map." Guess there are more examples of good work out like all of VTT's TW maps for newer people to look at.  Keep on improving and making ;).

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right now, it looks like terrorists took over the castle :)
« Last Edit: June 25, 2007, 02:47:26 pm by Blacksheepboy »

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Re: First map - small castle
« Reply #9 on: June 28, 2007, 01:59:34 am »
I like that bridge O.o
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Re: First map - small castle
« Reply #10 on: June 28, 2007, 02:47:50 am »
How is that tree capable of growing through solid stone?  Perhaps some dirt and soil would do it some good...

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Re: First map - small castle
« Reply #11 on: June 29, 2007, 04:46:14 pm »
wow...this looks nice, but the castle looks like a factory :/
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