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Offline Xxypher

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SURCOD -Panel 5 up!-
« on: June 25, 2007, 07:34:38 pm »
SURCOD is a comic I have been working on for a long while, and now I am bringing it into Soldat!
Also, the first SURCOD was drawn on paper, so this isn't as good.
I may not be the best at drawing with a mouse, but at least it isn't stick figure stuff.

The cast of SURCOD includes the following...
Brandon Miller "Me" *Long black hair*
Brandon Geerts " *Bowl cut like brown hair*
Sky Emmit *Dark brown short hair*
Brady Geerts *Black pointy hair*




Panel 1. "Threw my weapon."
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f133/Xxypher/225.jpg
Don't you hate it when you throw your weapon and then someone starts chasing you and there is nothing around to pick up?

Panel 2. "Pool sticks make bad weapons."
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f133/Xxypher/2251.png
Never try to play Soldat using a Pool Stick as your weapon.


Panel 3. "Why Zombie servers suck."
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f133/Xxypher/2252.png
Have you ever stumbled into a Zombie server not knowing what one is? Seeing a hoard of Zombies coming at you? Well Sky just found out what one is.


Panel 4. "If Nintendo made Soldat."
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f133/Xxypher/2253.png
This is what I would think Nintendo would do to Soldat if they made it.
Metroid on Brady's head.
Nothing wrong with me.
Brandon Geerts had a Super shroom.
And Sky has a pokeball.

NEW!
Panel 5. "Sleepy."

Please refrain from playing Soldat while drowsy.



-Next update before Wednesday-
« Last Edit: June 27, 2007, 12:35:20 am by Xxypher »
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Offline Wormdundee

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Re: SURCOD -Soldat Comic-
« Reply #1 on: June 25, 2007, 11:04:32 pm »
Well, you have a general idea down but the execution of drawing it could use some work. For example the one about dropping the weapon. All I see is a guy with a knife chasing someone. The addition of perhaps a gun lying on the ground behind the knife guy might help get the message across.

But I think it might be something that can't really be properly drawn with just one panel.


The second one, it looks like the guy with the rocket launcher is just kind chilling with it, he doesn't look very threatening. I think if you had reversed the positions of the two guys it would've given a better effect.

Overall though, it's a lot better drawing than a lot of the stuff you see on these forums. (I just keep thinking back to M's "comics").
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Re: SURCOD -Soldat Comic-
« Reply #2 on: June 26, 2007, 12:10:49 am »
He is just standing there with it...
This is a single panel comic series, and I am glad you didn't say anything on the style...

I am in the middle of making the next comic.

Date Posted: June 26, 2007, 12:23:04 AM
A new comic is up.
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Re: SURCOD -Soldat Comic-
« Reply #3 on: June 26, 2007, 02:08:58 am »
Man, your comic heroes looks like hippies  ;D
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Re: SURCOD -Soldat Comic-
« Reply #4 on: June 26, 2007, 02:29:36 am »
Love the drawing styles and the ideas good work :D Something a bit new with one panel thing
Good job
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Re: SURCOD -Soldat Comic-
« Reply #5 on: June 26, 2007, 02:45:33 am »
Quote from: SoNNy on June 26, 2007, 02:08:58 am
Man, your comic heroes looks like hippies  ;D
...hippies?
Why?
Because I have long hair?

Date Posted: June 26, 2007, 03:42:24 AM
Oh, and next comic coming in about an hour!
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Re: SURCOD -Soldat Comic-
« Reply #6 on: June 26, 2007, 03:08:30 am »
hte styles is clear and cool, gratz.
but yeah...instead of telling us whats happening, try draw the "past" aswell...it looks nicer.
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Re: SURCOD -Soldat Comic-
« Reply #7 on: June 26, 2007, 03:53:55 am »
Next comic going through final stages.
The comic is...
"What if Nintendo made Soldat."

Date Posted: June 26, 2007, 04:26:42 AM
New comic is now up!
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Re: SURCOD -Soldat Comic-
« Reply #8 on: June 26, 2007, 04:20:34 am »
yes... funny :D
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Re: SURCOD -Soldat Comic-
« Reply #9 on: June 26, 2007, 04:21:03 am »
Rofl i like the nintendo one nice work lol
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Re: SURCOD -Soldat Comic-
« Reply #10 on: June 26, 2007, 01:10:56 pm »
I am now taking requests!
If they seem fit I will make a comic about it!
But it has to be able to fit in one panel.
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Re: SURCOD -Soldat Comic-
« Reply #11 on: June 26, 2007, 03:33:08 pm »
Good for you. Git on MSN.
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Re: SURCOD -Panel 5 up!-
« Reply #12 on: June 27, 2007, 12:35:54 am »
MSN doesn't like to work for me.

Date Posted: June 26, 2007, 05:23:28 PM
So... any requests?


Date Posted: June 27, 2007, 01:31:02 AM
New comic up!
...Well panel,
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Re: SURCOD -Panel 5 up!-
« Reply #13 on: June 27, 2007, 03:34:53 am »
lol like the way he's sleeping xD
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Re: SURCOD -Panel 5 up!-
« Reply #14 on: June 27, 2007, 07:50:42 am »
Lol, panel 5. Nice stuff.
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Re: SURCOD -Panel 5 up!-
« Reply #15 on: June 28, 2007, 12:46:07 am »
Heh thanks.
Next comic in production.
Well, I am about to start working on it, I just came up with an idea...

Date Posted: June 27, 2007, 05:59:53 PM
*gets on knees*
WHY!? WHY IS MY COMIC SO UNLOVED!?
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Re: SURCOD -Panel 5 up!-
« Reply #16 on: June 28, 2007, 02:37:07 pm »
lots of empty space in latest one..
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Re: SURCOD -Panel 5 up!-
« Reply #17 on: June 28, 2007, 02:40:21 pm »
How about one involving TW?
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Re: SURCOD -Panel 5 up!-
« Reply #18 on: June 30, 2007, 04:01:58 pm »
Will do mxyzpie.

Date Posted: June 28, 2007, 04:07:10 PM
Comic on hold until my computer gets back form the upgrade/technical place...
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