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Offline Cookiegangsta

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« on: December 11, 2007, 10:24:30 pm »
inf_TraintrackHunt

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Train Tracks while hunting. :D


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Re: inf_TraintrackHunt
« Reply #1 on: December 12, 2007, 12:12:49 am »
That looks, kinda crap and beginner-ish.

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Re: inf_TraintrackHunt
« Reply #2 on: December 12, 2007, 03:30:11 am »
That looks, kinda crap and beginner-ish.

Hmm, nice critique.

Reminds me a lot of a duckhunt map. This really isn't that great of an inf, sorry to say. Really, the shading isn't so bad but the design, it's too straightforward. Also, I see nothing that has to do with traintracks at all in this map... Maybe I'm missing something. You ought to put one more route of some sort, and more complicated flag spawns on each side, maybe a train station sort of design on one end, and a house sort of design on the other side? Maybe also having some sort of traintrack polygon design for your bottom route.

Well, that's how I see it. It's yours to edit and revise, but these are my recommendations. Good luck, and it looks like a decent start. Just needs a little more work is all, and I'm not saying that you haven't put in effort because it's evident that you have. Just a bit more work, and this won't be so bad.

Edit:

Wait, is this suppose to be modeled after a duckhunt map? I just sort of realized that it might be...That would explain the map layout... Still, I see nothing that has to do with traintracks...
« Last Edit: December 12, 2007, 03:32:29 am by Blacksheepboy »

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Re: inf_TraintrackHunt
« Reply #3 on: December 12, 2007, 08:59:17 am »
Meh... it doesn't likes me at all. It's very, very dark. Lights are annoying, and the platforms are placed randomly along the way, so it dislikes me. I like your other Duckhunt map, this doesn't. Try to do another gameplay type map, like CTF or DM. Duckhunt sucks IMO.

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Re: inf_TraintrackHunt
« Reply #4 on: December 12, 2007, 04:07:27 pm »
That looks, kinda crap and beginner-ish.

Stfu.

yea I guess this need more work in it.
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Re: inf_TraintrackHunt
« Reply #5 on: December 12, 2007, 04:40:27 pm »
Yes, it needs more work, a new overview with .PNG format and a cookie for me :)

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Re: inf_TraintrackHunt
« Reply #6 on: December 12, 2007, 04:56:22 pm »
Looks good, I like it. But as the niko guy pointed out, it needs some work.



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Re: inf_TraintrackHunt
« Reply #7 on: December 12, 2007, 04:59:57 pm »
Yes, it needs more work, a new overview with .PNG format and a cookie for me :)

new cookie? lol
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