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Offline Szewczuq

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inf_Grass - my first map :)
« on: December 26, 2007, 08:58:21 am »
Map name:inf_Grass

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Offline Blacksheepboy

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Re: inf_Grass - my first map :)
« Reply #1 on: December 26, 2007, 11:26:15 am »
I must say, that overview sucks. Very small.

Ok...

Looks like an interesting layout. Yay, infiltration maps :). Well, I'm sorry to be lame, but until you get a better screenshot, *shrug*. Get a screenshot without the spawns and objects showing. Then we could see your map.

Yep.

Edit:

Alright, fine I'll comment this map a little more. This looks heavily inspired by inf_Fortress if I'm not correct? On the outside of the fortress, you need at least one opening into the main base. Also, I'd take the whole base, move it up a bit and add another level of stuff to the fortress. The flag is too near the main ground of the map. Just, try not to make it too similar to inf_Fortress.

Here is a representation of what I kind of mean:
« Last Edit: December 26, 2007, 11:39:32 am by Blacksheepboy »

Offline Centurion

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Re: inf_Grass - my first map :)
« Reply #2 on: December 26, 2007, 05:18:12 pm »
Maybe more coloring and shading`?

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Re: inf_Grass - my first map :)
« Reply #3 on: December 26, 2007, 06:56:37 pm »
sorry but i can't :( its my forst map :P i ade this on 5.11.2007  :)



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Re: inf_Grass - my first map :)
« Reply #4 on: December 26, 2007, 10:22:51 pm »
Like your other map, this just looks dull with both layout and look.

Capping looks too easy for alpha side, especially with the diagonal entrances.

Also give more spawns for grenades and health kits... for this and your other map, spread them out a bit.

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Re: inf_Grass - my first map :)
« Reply #5 on: December 27, 2007, 06:35:14 am »
Very similar to inf_Bunker that is randomly with every soldat.
Map is too sharpy *harsh*.
But if you will work at this map im sure that you'll get it pro.