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Offline The_Ninja

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« on: July 16, 2006, 08:24:30 pm »
ok, heres one that ive just been putting together bit by bit, untill a few months ago when i finished it, i just havent bothered to put it up on here yet... but here it is!

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Offline jrgp

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Re: ctf_Concise
« Reply #1 on: July 16, 2006, 08:38:27 pm »
It just looks a little to plain.

It needs more scenery and shading.

Also the moon doesn't look that good behind the polys.
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Re: ctf_Concise
« Reply #2 on: July 16, 2006, 09:48:07 pm »
It'd be nice if you included the Properties window from PolyWorks. (Hopefully you are using polyworks...)

Not a bad layout, i gove you props for not using the symmetry crutch. Maybe some trees would help the looks a bit.

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Re: ctf_Concise
« Reply #3 on: July 16, 2006, 10:32:58 pm »
there is a fair bit of scenery in this map, it just isnt visible due to the zooming and yes there is shading on just about every platform...

here is a piccy of the landscape zoomed in near the sideways sorta C looking thing... below the moon...



and unfortunatly for you i am not using Polyworks, i am using one of the older versions of a mapmaker...

Quote from: Rambo_6 on July 16, 2006, 09:48:07 pm

i gove you props for not using the symmetry crutch.

to this, unfortunatly i dont understand it...
« Last Edit: July 16, 2006, 10:34:39 pm by The_Ninja »
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Re: ctf_Concise
« Reply #4 on: July 16, 2006, 11:30:13 pm »
Well, both sides of the map are done differently (not duplicated then flipped horizontally).

Some may see that as a lazy approach, although some maps benefit from symmetrical layouts.

Not bad scenery, maybe bring the roof lower?
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Re: ctf_Concise
« Reply #5 on: July 17, 2006, 12:51:30 am »
on top of the right >> base? or maybe just put some more stuff in there?
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Re: ctf_Concise
« Reply #6 on: July 17, 2006, 01:16:10 am »
You could add another island, but remember to try and keep the level fair for both sides.
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Re: ctf_Concise
« Reply #7 on: July 17, 2006, 03:12:55 pm »
Quote from: jrgp on July 16, 2006, 08:38:27 pm
It just looks a little to plain.
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Re: ctf_Concise
« Reply #8 on: July 17, 2006, 03:15:12 pm »
It could use more shading on the ground, and possibly some stretchings here and there around the texture.
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Re: ctf_Concise
« Reply #9 on: July 17, 2006, 03:17:38 pm »
Yeah, though it looks a bit plain, I like the grassy areas you've put here and there.
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Re: ctf_Concise
« Reply #10 on: July 17, 2006, 07:57:17 pm »
Lightsource reccomendation: Color the tops of the polys brightest, the inner areas medium, and the bottoms darkest. Here, you only made the bottom dark, but left out the rest.
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Re: ctf_Concise
« Reply #11 on: July 19, 2006, 02:26:02 am »
i like it how it is, but if you guys want to improve it you can, just download it and edit it and post it here or on a new thread...
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