R/S ctf_de_2base

[Maniek]

hello, this is my firs map

- 60 Jetticks
- no waypoints
- no weather

screens:













http://files.filefront.com/ctf+de+2baserar/;10077635;/fileinfo.html
1,5mb

[jrgp]

Oh wow, that's EXCELLENT for a first map! You placed the scenery perfectly and the colors blend beautifully, IMHO. Looks fun to play. Please don't stop with this one, make more maps!

[Blacksheepboy]

Rather a bold attempt for a first map, and a good one at that. I can tell that you have been playing Soldat for a little while now (correct me if I am wrong). Nice work.

When you place polygons behind scenery, make a habit to also use transparency for the polygons since you can see the polygon edges poking out from behind the scenery. Rather a large filesize, but honestly, I have made maps with bigger filesizes, so that's nothing for anyone to fret about...

Very nice. I humbly suggest that you come up with a title worthy of this map as the current title lacks lustre.

Coloring looks good. I couldn't have made this map better myself. Not too lengthy and complicated.

[xSystemx]

Wow, great map, especially for a first. The gameply looks nice and simple (but fun), and the map itself looks great. Keep up the great work, you have huge potential.

[Leo]

I have added this map at my RSA server. Nice to see something is "moving" at RS mapping

[Maniek]

Please don't stop with this one, make more maps!

Probably, not, because nobody don't like my map on server.

[Zabijaka]

I support this guy ;]
Good work Maniek

Please don't stop with this one, make more maps!

Probably, not, because nobody don't like my map on server.

This is your first map, dont give up because not all players like your map.

[-Major-]

Nice work! it's often hard to make the vertex colores good, but you did a great job at that.

[Maek|]

Really good as your first map! But it seems you made it kinda off-scale. Everything seems to be big compared to the player, you can see it inside the house, where roof is too high.

[Blacksheepboy]

Please don't stop with this one, make more maps!

Probably, not, because nobody don't like my map on server.

Doesn't mean that you have to stop mapping. Always I use myself as an example: I've mapped several maps that  weren't that good and had poor playability, and I've mapped a few that are pretty decent. Don't let you first map get you down just because the playability was a little poor. Either work on improving this map, or start working on a new one.

If I may be so bold: You've already surpassed a few people in mapping ability with just this one map (I refer to mappers not so renowned). This map is probably better than some of my recent maps, because I make the mistake of not taking game-playability seriously, or don't plan enough.

So, my final words are: if you enjoy mapping to any extent, work on it some more. You'll find that over time, you'll improve. It's like running 1 mile for time. When you are a dedicated runner and practice efficiently, you will improve your mile time etc. You get my point...

Good luck with whatever you wish to do.

[Maniek]

Ok, i started making new map: ctf_cs_hotel