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Offline The Skull.swiss

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ctf_tw_blooddawn
« on: July 21, 2006, 05:44:33 am »
hello all
this is my first trenchwar map
and i worked 3 days on this map
i hope its good enugh for the avarax pwnage server ;)
load it and have fun


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Offline GluLm

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Re: ctf_tw_blooddawn
« Reply #1 on: July 21, 2006, 08:27:53 am »
Looks good so far...
I think the sun lacks some kind of ocean scenery that'd make the scene feel wider... Like an orange/blueish ocean with fog.
Also please avoid posting BMP files, use PNG as you did for the overview or even better: resized JPEG.
It's an OK map to me anyway.
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Offline Rambo_6

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Re: ctf_tw_blooddawn
« Reply #2 on: July 21, 2006, 08:30:55 am »
Take a larger overview and upload it to imageshack... ;)

Or take screens of individual sections of the map.
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Re: ctf_tw_blooddawn
« Reply #3 on: July 21, 2006, 09:03:29 am »
I don't really like the coloring, how its mostly green and brown.
And convert those bmp screens to png.

But I did like your scenery usage alot. So you get an A+ on scenery.
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Offline Mistercharles

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Re: ctf_tw_blooddawn
« Reply #4 on: July 21, 2006, 10:47:15 am »
Make the bridge very dark, to simulate the brightness of the sun.

Map looks gorgeous by the way.
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Re: ctf_tw_blooddawn
« Reply #5 on: July 21, 2006, 11:05:57 am »
I think it's good enough for the server, but that's for Avarax to decide.
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Offline Blues

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Re: ctf_tw_blooddawn
« Reply #6 on: July 21, 2006, 05:38:42 pm »
Yes, besides, we need new maps.
It's looking nice.
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Offline Meep.

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Re: ctf_tw_blooddawn
« Reply #7 on: July 21, 2006, 05:48:29 pm »
I think it is an ideal TW map, good job.
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Offline The Skull.swiss

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Re: ctf_tw_blooddawn
« Reply #8 on: July 22, 2006, 02:34:40 am »
Ty all ;)
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Re: ctf_tw_blooddawn
« Reply #9 on: July 27, 2006, 04:08:47 pm »
Looks fun, layout is good, scenery usage is great, shading is pretty good, nothing wrong here :D

Good job ;D
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