this map is actualy fun ^^
you're getting better, but there are some polys that are too stretched, you have to make smaller polys with multitexture, or play with user defines. you didn't use the multitexture, try making something different. The last tree is too stretched too. You forgot to put the other teams's spawns... they spawn at random objects (alpha spawn, or in the flags...).
The lava fall in the right of the map is weird