Nothing but Tears

[tehsnipah]

This actually happened when I was playing survival mode, and I wanted to make it in a little more dramatic, continuous story

Chapter 1- The Eye of a Sniper

While our team was making a strategy, all I was able to hear was the wind from our entrance and exit at the upper level. The only think I can think of is to stay alive. My teammates were starting to prepare their guns, grenades, and most of all, death they have to face. I heard the entrance and exit opening, I was going out the exit, a sniper like me won't even stand three seconds in the open cross fire. I went down the exit towards the under ground path, where barricades and hiding places were plenty, perfect for me. I heard some gun fires from my radio, some of my troops were dying, requesting back ups. I was hiding at the lower poll in the under ground tunnel, where it's hard for them to spot me. Every five seconds, I checked the tunnel, checking any enemy coming down.

I noticed that my radio was all the sudden silent, all of my troops died... Just me... All of them in two minutes... No... Not even past two minutes. I was petrified. Having no idea what to do, I was just hiding for the sake of my life. Then I heard foot steps coming from other end of the tunnel. ... Two guys were talking... Suddenly, my tears came out, my whole body shaking, sweating crazy.

Only thing I now was able to think is to kill them for my own life. Fortunately, I overheard an enemy soldier groaning, "Fuck... They shook us up pretty damned hard. How do you feel man?"

The other guy was breathing, spasmodically, "I'm bleeding out... Even a punch will knock me out..."

"This is Bravo, this is Bravo, it seems like the lower tunnel is clear. We're heading back up. Also, you DO have the intel, right?"

I wasn't able to hear them over the radio, but I had a clue they had it by the chuckling of the soldier. "Roger that, by the way, what happened to your partner?... He fell and died?! ... Take care soldier, you're the only one at the top with intel. Who knows there are other soldiers preparing to ambush you. We'll be up there soon. Bravo out."

I was ready, I know that my sniper rifle was strong enough to go through a person and luckily if I line up my sniper rifle between them, it'll go through the brittled soldier also. Perfect, I'll take two down with one shot, and have enough time to load up again to shoot down the bast with our intel. All I had to do is wait until they go back.

I heard their foot step, fainting a bit by bit. I sneaked towards them while crouching. Luckily, the weak one was at front, being helped getting pushed forward. This was my chance, one mistake, and I'll be swiss-cheesed. I aimed towards two, lining up with my cross hair. 'Steady... steady....'
I pulled my trigger; the giant bullet went through both of them. I saw the crimson rose blooming in front of my eyes; I felt a bit relieved now. Still, I had to do one more task before I do anything else. I rushed towards the exit, and saw the last bastard, he spotted me too.

As soon as he saw me, he started to rush towards their intel base, where he will be picked up by their back ups. Luck wasn't on me this time, I fired at him, but I missed his head by an inch. Suddenly, in a split second, I just dropped a live grenade towards the pit at the end of the other side of the tunnel. Now I remember why, the grenade jump....

I leaped through the air towards the enemy's intel base... Taking out my knife... Threw as hard as I could... And that was it. The knife stuck behind him right at the spine. He froze all sudden, didn't even twitch.

I grabbed our intel, putting it back to our base, and while I was walking, there was a trail of tear through out the whole path. I was soaked in sweat, shivered, and weeping until by back up was there to pick me up. I saw the truck, they were full of rooks, who never fired a gun before. They tried to cheer me up, but I was keep lamenting about my fallen troops. When I raised my head up, I saw their eyes, all looking like innocents, who had never fired a gun before. I looked at the mirror while I was crying. Then I noticed the difference. My eyes were widened, vicious, and fierce as a Hawk's eyes.

I then realized... I now had the killer instinct.

Then I heard the leader of the back up, "All right boys, our next spot is Maya. Get your ass prepare, and I will see you there."


Too beeh contehnued~

[FlyingForehead]

Good story t.s. Waiting expectantly for the next installment.

[el,goog]

omagod-omagod
that was excellent. cant wait for next one...

 

[tehsnipah]

Haha sweet! Some people actually like it!

I'm still playing and trying to have the perfect moment in the ctf_Maya.

I might as well bull shit and make up one soon if I don't have any good moment.

[Sir Jeremy]

Hehe pretty good read man.  Can't wait for the next part.  Keep up the good work.

[Thinkto urself]

It would've been great but the little grammar mistakes here and there sort of messed things up.

[jilby99]

Hay guys i know this has nothing to do with this forum but is soldat 1.3.1 down?

[tehsnipah]

It would've been great but the little grammar mistakes here and there sort of messed things up.

D:

Care to help/edit a bit for me?

[el,goog]

It would've been great but the little grammar mistakes here and there sort of messed things up.

I don't get how little grammar mistakes can mess it up. We're all scattered around the world, not everyone is perfect.

[Platehead]

Oi, I had a good moment on Maya where I got weapon drop bug (could dramatise it) and picked up a random MP5... was reloading and knifed someone and picked up DEs, was really hurt.  Took flag, ran mid, when someone was chasin me at bridge with aug I somehow clicked three times and killed him before he shot 2 bullets xD.

Was a nub at a pub, but still, you can dramatise it.

Nice story, waiting for the next one

[tehsnipah]

I was playing, hoping for a good moment... But son of a bitch, I had no good montage/moment...

I will make up a story though, and going to use Platehead's this time.

HOPEFULLY tomorrow, I will load it up.

[adam01526]

nice story, keep going