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Offline Corporal Dunn

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Am i good in poems?
« on: October 20, 2010, 08:25:04 am »
Foxconn

Yes, that guy sould mean something for you,
but he doesn't, because he acts like an ass.
He tried to change himself. Everything was good.
He said - There is no "I"! There is only "US!"

He promised to stop this gibberish spam.
He feels that he is in very big luck.
But unfortunately...TA-DAM!
NOBODY GIVES A BLOODY F**K!

HE TRIED EVERYTHING TO BE LIKED BY YOU!
BUT HIS INBOX WAS FULL OF GIBBERISH FLAME!
Then he discovered, that everything has a clue.
And said: "Good Bye, forums. You are all lame."
« Last Edit: October 20, 2010, 08:29:32 am by Corporal Dunn »

Offline MattH

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Re: Am i good in poems?
« Reply #1 on: October 20, 2010, 08:29:49 am »
do you want the truth? Or would you like your cyanide capsule now? :P

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Re: Am i good in poems?
« Reply #2 on: October 20, 2010, 09:50:34 am »
nice poem i like it

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Re: Am i good in poems?
« Reply #3 on: October 20, 2010, 10:00:22 am »
non Focx

Yes, that guy should change himself,
but doesn't, because He feels that he is in luck.
He tried to BLOODY GIBBERISH you. But unfortunately...TA-DAM!
Everything was an ass.

He said There is no good! There are only lame!
He promised to gibberish this spam.
he acts like HIS INBOX WAS FULL OF EVERYTHING!

BUT NOBODY GIVES A clue for Good FLAME.
he LIKED that everything has a something
Then HE TRIED TO F**K YOU And said: "is I stop!"
he BE discovered BY very mean big "You".

"US" promised to stop all this forums.
-Bye
« Last Edit: October 20, 2010, 11:39:19 am by Horve »

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Re: Am i good in poems?
« Reply #4 on: October 20, 2010, 10:12:09 am »
Awful poem I like it..?
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Re: Am i good in poems?
« Reply #5 on: October 20, 2010, 12:55:31 pm »
2/10 would not read again

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Re: Am i good in poems?
« Reply #6 on: October 20, 2010, 01:18:14 pm »
I like Horve's version better!

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Re: Am i good in poems?
« Reply #7 on: October 20, 2010, 01:42:40 pm »
I like Horve's version better!

Yeah. Foxconn's poem does nothing for me whatsoever.
There are other worlds than these

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Re: Am i good in poems?
« Reply #8 on: October 20, 2010, 02:05:32 pm »
this is sad
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Re: Am i good in poems?
« Reply #9 on: October 20, 2010, 02:20:10 pm »
Good bye Foxconn, I just hope that you stop being lame and all...
Maybe this is good for you, go find a real life, go and see how people behave and finaly please grow up...

I don't give a shi~ about you or anyone on this forums, but this are just my thoughts to you :>
I wish you luck my "old" friend..
EDITED: And I guess welcome Corporal Dunn? :D
« Last Edit: October 20, 2010, 02:32:17 pm by pavliko »
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Re: Am i good in poems?
« Reply #10 on: October 20, 2010, 03:54:26 pm »
i wonder if shard is good at poetry
I attend grammar school, last grade, and ignorance is all around me. Well, good for them. Ignorance is bliss.

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Re: Am i good in poems?
« Reply #11 on: October 20, 2010, 04:54:14 pm »
I see you are dishonored and mentally scarred.
Now you have returned and giving it a try another.
Why is my cock standing erect, rock hard?
I was asking meself, but should ask your mother?
I have a little hunch that wouldn't do any good.
She did after all fail to answer your questions of life.
God I wanna get rid of this tutsy wood.
Don't get me wrong, I'm not here to strife.
I've urged to taste your dick once more, Foxconn.
And why I'm talking in a manner so unpleasant?
I want my bag of words to be a turn on.
That reaches everyone here present.
Now, now time to lay off the cripples!
Hit me there, I want boner to sprain!
Embrace my crotch and rub my nipples!
Dog fucking christ! I'm starting it again!



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Re: Am i good in poems?
« Reply #12 on: October 20, 2010, 07:21:59 pm »
i wonder if shard is good at poetry

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Re: Am i good in poems?
« Reply #13 on: October 20, 2010, 09:42:25 pm »
I hate your poem
It does not flow very well
too long; did not read
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Re: Am i good in poems?
« Reply #14 on: October 20, 2010, 10:39:06 pm »
what are you doing 4yo
stop writing poems you are a 4yo
(it doesnt even rhyme)

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Re: Am i good in poems?
« Reply #15 on: October 23, 2010, 11:56:20 am »
This poem isn't actually a real thing. It's just a joke. I feel good as f**k, and smiluu is awesome too.

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Re: Am i good in poems?
« Reply #16 on: October 23, 2010, 12:20:15 pm »
I see you are dishonored and mentally scarred.
Now you have returned and giving it a try another.
Why is my cock standing erect, rock hard?
I was asking meself, but should ask your mother?
I have a little hunch that wouldn't do any good.
She did after all fail to answer your questions of life.
God I wanna get rid of this tutsy wood.
Don't get me wrong, I'm not here to strife.
I've urged to taste your dick once more, Foxconn.
And why I'm talking in a manner so unpleasant?
I want my bag of words to be a turn on.
That reaches everyone here present.
Now, now time to lay off the cripples!
Hit me there, I want boner to sprain!
Embrace my crotch and rub my nipples!
Dog f**king christ! I'm starting it again!


You're really perv :P
Sorry if I'm insolent.