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Offline jettlarue

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dm tm_Wireless
« on: August 17, 2006, 04:43:56 pm »
Here is my second map i have worked hard on :). It is dm and tm with waypoints(there not that good though, although when playing with more than 6 bots it will be fine).  Here is stats about it:

File name:     wireless.PMS
File size:     62152b
Last modified: 17-08-2006
Map title:     Wireless By Mr. T
Map unique ID: 422733
Texture name:  disaster.bmp
Polygon count: 304
Scenery count: 36
Spawn points:  44
Colliders:     24

Grenade count: 5
Medikit count: 5
Jets:          normal (190)
Weather:       normal
Steps:         hard
Background:    #513f29 - #062701


The map has a long drop, so if you fall off you can duke it out for approximately 6 seconds before you will die. Quite fun imo :D. Please comment if you...have any comments :)
« Last Edit: August 17, 2006, 04:56:35 pm by jettlarue »

Offline KamikazeDuck

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Re: Wireless
« Reply #1 on: August 17, 2006, 05:04:15 pm »
This looks very nice but there are a few things that you should change with the shading. The surrounding rocky part is shaded very nicely but the rocks that are inside are too dark in comparison, mostly the two lower ones. I understand you probably wanted it to be darker as it is below another rock but you shouldn't go overboard with that idea, especially when the scenery on the rock looks much lighter.

I'm not sure on the gameplay, though it might be okay.

I find the name to be a bit misleading, I was expecting a map on a laptop or something.

All up, this is a good map and I'm happy to hear you put effort into it, just think about the shading changes I suggested ( make the tops of the lower rocks lighter to match the rest of the map and the scenery above them).
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Offline Bgretydews

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Re: dm tm_Wireless
« Reply #2 on: August 17, 2006, 05:32:27 pm »
Wow, Looks really nice but like KD said the bottom rocks are to dark and that really lets the rest of the maps looks down
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Offline TrmD

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Re: dm tm_Wireless
« Reply #3 on: August 19, 2006, 02:08:47 pm »
Well done - I like the layout; the shading tool was well used

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