Author Topic: Wartorn Soldat coming soon  (Read 4359 times)

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Offline xtishereb

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Re: Wartorn Soldat coming soon
« Reply #20 on: November 27, 2006, 04:56:11 pm »
You've got good shading, but you need to work on your gun handles. Take a look at what papasurf's done with his guns in the Neo-Arsenal Weapon Packs. You've got handles with a 1 pixel slope, I recommend a 2 pixel slope, the same papasurf uses. Looks more natural, IMHO.
To understand what I mean by slope, see the attached image. Larger version of the slope is on the right.

Your shading is great. Follow those tips, though.
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Offline Death MachineX350

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Re: Wartorn Soldat coming soon
« Reply #21 on: November 27, 2006, 10:55:47 pm »
Well you changed it from the Doom thingy. Use a little more color please. Besides that it looks pretty good.

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Re: Wartorn Soldat coming soon
« Reply #22 on: November 28, 2006, 03:48:57 pm »
I like the way this mod is evolving. But, as many said before, the Barrett looks out of place.
As for the colors; maybe you could use some lighter shades of gray or green.