tw_Wüstenschlacht

[Sytrus]

TW_Wüstenschlacht

'Wüstenschlacht' (or 'Wuestenschlacht') means 'Desert Fight'.

It's my first map ever, so don't be too harsh please, constructive critism would be appreciated. I know the shading...sucks btw. It took me a lot of work, I hope some of you may check it out.

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Middle Bunker

[iDante]

its very fun but a little too short make it longer and maybe add some more shading!

[Sytrus]

Yeah as I said, I suck at shading

[Laser Guy]

I suck at shading too (look at dm_Jungelee), so don't worry about it

[Blacksheepboy]

It looks alright. My first map was somewhat desert-like too except that it was more a pyramid sandy stone type thing. Well, good work so far. I say add a bit more depth to the bottom so that it isn't completely flat (more polygon stuff to take up space). Well, so far in my map making experience, I try to make it so that the empty spaces outside the map aren't as obvious (you have to somewhat try to actually see "outside" the map). That's just me though.

It isn't so bad for a first so good work. I like the name. The name of the map I'm working on is called Welcome to the Jungle lol. I know, nice name...

[Laser Guy]

In the jungle, the mighty jungle, the lion sleeps tonight!!

[Mr. Domino]

In the jungle, the mighty jungle, the lion sleeps tonight!!

In the spaceship, the silver space ship, the lion waves good-bye.

On topic: Seems okay but likely not long enough to satisfy most TW players. Also, there is a title character limit, and I'm pretty sure this map exceeds it. While not as impressive sounding, tw_desertbattle would fit within the limits to allow the map to be loaded on a server.

[Sytrus]

tw_wuestenschlacht fits in, too and means the same. Yeah, I know it may not be long enough......was my first map.

[Mr. Domino]

tw_wuestenschlacht fits in, too and means the same.

I know it means the same; I looked it up. Still, the name is too long, at least if you ever hope to see it on a server. For whatever reason, the server will only recognize maps if it meets a certain character limit, which this one exceeds. It's just bad practice.

[Underworld]

il pass on this one,no shadin at all