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Offline t0bsen

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ctf_Lasum
« on: July 15, 2006, 06:53:43 pm »
Tsup,
this is my first real map.
I wanted to waypoint it but failed miserably, maybe Ill waypoint it some other time.
Done with Polyworks. Took me a couple of Hours I guess. (dont know exactly)
Erm, I think thats it, if you have any questions feel free to ask.
Waddayathink?

ps - In the Selfkilldotcom Forum they said a lot of positive stuff, but I want some negative feedback as well, that way I know what I should improve on my next Maps.
come on, have a go, dont be shy

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Offline Mistercharles

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Re: ctf_Lasum
« Reply #1 on: July 15, 2006, 07:08:56 pm »
Only negative feedback:

Lack of scenery, the stuff presented is a bit repetitive and too bright for the map. Some of the poly colors are very cartoonish.
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Re: ctf_Lasum
« Reply #2 on: July 15, 2006, 07:09:41 pm »
I really like the poly-placement and scenery usuage, but it is just too dark, brighten it.

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Offline Eagles_Arrows

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Re: ctf_Lasum
« Reply #3 on: July 15, 2006, 08:14:39 pm »
It reminds me of iDante's style, but it's quite bland.  The layout's great, it would be better if you added some more scenery and colliders.  Give it trees, give it bushes, give it something.
« Last Edit: July 15, 2006, 08:16:11 pm by Eagles_Arrows »
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Offline Rambo_6

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Re: ctf_Lasum
« Reply #4 on: July 15, 2006, 09:13:17 pm »
Maybe get a more outstanding texture, add some bunkers and whatnot, and add more scenery. Nice layout.
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Offline jettlarue

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Re: ctf_Lasum
« Reply #5 on: July 16, 2006, 03:30:42 am »
i like it. the way it is shaded and everything tightly makes it feel like you are playing on artwork. needs a couple bunkers though. great job. and welcome to soldat forums
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Offline -WildBill-

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Re: ctf_Lasum
« Reply #6 on: July 19, 2006, 06:25:57 pm »
much better than the first. aand yeah, the light sceneries are from Anna's gloomy dawn, or something like that. my only concern is with all the tress: TREES DONT GROW SIDEWAYS! up 'n down only lol, unless its some kind of retarded tree...

EDIT: oops, this message was meant for your new map lol. guess I replied to the link you put up on your new map. :-[
« Last Edit: July 19, 2006, 07:22:26 pm by -WildBill- »
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