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Offline kniferknight95

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STORY (PART 7!!!)
« on: July 01, 2008, 01:02:04 pm »
Part 1

As i took my first step onto the battlegrounds of Equinox, I instantly felt a rush. My Bravo team had non other than the best solders they could find. As I began sneaking into the tunnels below, i made sure i had my sniper riffle loaded, 2 grenades, and a knife. As soon as i got into the tunnels, a sniper shot soared past my head. It knocked my helmet off. I instantly dove for cover behind a box crate. As I began yelling for some heavy support, a solder came down, with an MP5. As soon as he began advancing, he was killed. from a shot to the head. As i laid down, i held my knife up over the box. Reluctantly, there was a reflection. About 2 crates ahead, was a sniper. Under his helmet, i saw he had jet black hair. I put my gun in an opening between the 2 crates i laid between. As i shot the gun, I heard a splatter sound. I checked, and the sniper was dead. After i grabbed my helmet, i stood up, looking at the dead solder behind me. I could manage 1 more grenade. As I moved up as quietly as i could, I saw a solder with a chain gun. I crouched behind the nearest set of crates. As i aimed my riffle, I noticed the moonlight was reflecting off of the gun barrel. I shot the gun, only to be blown on my back. I heard the solder scream in agony. I almost felt bad for him. As i walked up to the dying solder, I stuck my knife into his stomach. I still had a long ways to go. Up ahead, the bridge was down. I called in for some support. By the time everybody had gathered up, we began working on the lower bridge. TO BE CONTINUED!!!! I KNOW ITS NOT TOO GOOD!!!

Part 2

As my allies had reached the bridge, i noticed a dead body from the enemy. This was my chance to make a great impact on the enemy. As I took the body and went in disguise, I threw the body into the spike pit. I sprinted across the bridge and saw the enemy sniper. He checked me out. He looked me over from head to toes. I held my breath. Just as i started sweating, another soldier came down. I was relived when the sniper turned and told his soldier one of the enemy had been reported missing by a scout. This was a bad problem, not only would I have to take out the scout, I would have to take out the sniper. The best on his team. I ran upstairs and saw the scout. He was packing a shotgun and starting to head out. I had all of the rage built up inside of me. As i took out my knife, there was a brief moment where, I felt I shouldn't do this. But my emotions took over my body. I slashed my knife in his back. As he fell screaming in agony, I stabbed him in the stomach. Somehow, the sniper hadn't heard. As i crept up behind him, I saw the heavy soldier. If i were to survive, I would have to take out the sniper, and throw the knife at him. This was easier said than done. By the time the sniper was dead, the heavy soldier turned around and shot at me. As i dove behind the crates, I was already hit in several places. The shooting stopped. I waited, I saw him walk up to me, with a handgun, it was aimed at me. Just as he said, "Say your prayers", a sniper shot hit him and he was dead right away. I was the luckiest person in the world at that point. As I ran upstairs i took the flag. When i was running out, I was hit from a turret shot. I fell on my knees and began crawling. Another shot hit my back. A nearby team mate offered help, I simply told him to take the flag, and save us from death. As I threw the flag to him, he caught it and ran. As I took my last breath, just as I saw the enemy advancing I said, "You Son of a twates...WILL NOT WIN!!"

Part 3

Today, me and my men (Bravo) were ordered to capture the Ash area. We were sitting around inside our base for hours. Since i was the sniper, I just sat on the second floor in the window. My team's heavy support crew, were ordered to scout out. A heavy machine gunner and a rocket launcher. They were going into the tunnels below. I decided to sit down in my small chair and munch on my beef jerky. By the time I finished, I took a sip of my water. Just as I turned to snipe again, my helmet went flying off. As i fell off my chair, I noticed the Machine gunner dragging the rocket launcher. Just the rocket launcher. I knew the other heavy support gunner died. As i picked up my helmet, I saw the machine gunner setting up the gun. The scouts came running in with their shotguns. They were bleeding everywhere. One scout had blood covering his knife. As they sat down to rest, one of them fell over. I stayed low, watching everything happen. The medic came in and looked him over. He was dead. As I went back up to the window, I saw an enemy loading his riffle. I aimed my gun. Just as I shot the gun, so did he. He hit my spotter. He fell over screaming. As I turned and faced him, he had a ruger shot in his arm. I called for the medic. As i heard the screaming, I turned away. Just as I looked, someone ran in with a chainsaw. I put away my sniper riffle and took out my handgun. As I went downstairs, I saw him inside a corner. He charged at me, screaming. I shot the gun and missed him. He slashed and my feet and I dropped to the floor. Just before he killed me, I shot him several times in the face. I managed upstairs to the medic. Things were quiet the rest of the day. But not that night they weren't. STAY TUNED FOR PART 4!!!!!

Part 4

That night in the Ash area, inside my base I was just about to get off my shift. I noticed some screaming downstairs. It was the machine gunner. He was going upstairs and he fell and sprained his ankle. My spotter was sleeping, with a bandage around his shoulder. As I woke him up and told him it was his shift, I went to sleep

Nearly two hours later I woke up due to the fact that I heard screaming downstairs. I thought it was the gunner still. But when I heard a gunshot, I ran downstairs. There was an alpha inside of our base wearing our uniform. He was dead but he had everything with him. Grenades, knifes, handguns, and a riffle. I knew he was the one that shot my spotter. He had a very bad wound in his leg from me. I decided to head back to bed.

"GET UP!!! DAMMIT GET UP!!!!" thats what my spotter was yelling to me. I looked around, everybody was frozen with fear. Somebody had cut the power inside our base. All I could hear was chattering and... what nobody ever wants to hear in the dark... a chainsaw. There was a chainsaw revving and I heard the dozens of blades. When the chainsaw went off, I heard the medic screaming. With one last breath, I heard a shot. I lit up my lighter and saw his body. It was gruesome. I nearly vomited. I put my lighter away, and put my knife under my sniper riffle. Now it was a bayonet. When i went downstairs, thats when all hell broke loose. STAY TUNED FOR PART 5!!!! (sorry i just need a break...ill try to make a new story everyday.)

Part 5

As I was downstairs with my knife on my sniper riffle, I turned around. Nothing. As I turned again i saw a distinct shine in the hallway. It was perfectly still. I didn't think much of it, but when it came charging at me, I only had one thought, "Kill kill kill". Just before the smalling revving blades went into me, I shot blind. It hit him in the arm. He swung the chainsaw and slashed my left shoulder. I slashed my knife and got him in the chest. I ran up to the second floor and found a MP5 laying around. I picked it up and shot right at his chest. When i heard the thud downstairs, I knew i was fine from there. I went back up to my sniper point on the third floor, where the medic was giving my wounded spotter a sip of water. As he looked at me he said, "Oh my god what the hell happened now". I sat down and took a bite of the leftover beef jerky.

The next morning at around 6 am or so, we heard shooting, grenade explosions, and chainsaws. I looked outside and saw a machine gunner inside the doorway in the other base pinning my men down. I picked up my sniper riffle and went behind the box inside the window. When i looked inside the scope, I noticed blood on it. I saw one enemy crawling under his machine gunners fire behind the small curb like thing in the middle of both of our bases. I shot, but somehow missed. The window was to small to shot from at that angle. I put away my sniper riffle and took the MP5. As much as I hated the gun, I used it anyhow.

I was behind the crates in our doorway opening. I saw my medic right behind me. He gave the spotter a handgun just in case. We ran outside and before getting shot, rolled then crawled behind the curb. He was already hit. I stuck my gun up into the air and began shooting. Before I hit him, he hit my hand. Non the less, I kept shooting. When it was safe enough to get up, I ran to the medic and dragged him inside. There were no medical kits around. I suddenly remembered we stored all of them upstairs on the third floor. I gave him my MP5 and sprinted upstairs. When i got there, the spotter was standing up. He looked as though he was waiting for me. Thats when he said. "I'm going with you" I needed all of the help I could get.

When we brought the medical kit downstairs, the medic was dead. Somebody sniped him. We ran downstairs and saw the gunner die right before us. As alpha walked up to us, we dropped our guns. But now we were prisoners of war. STAY TUNED FOR PART 6!!! WILL THEY ESCAPE?! WHO KNOWS! I THINK ILL MAKE PART 6 TODAY!!!!!
   

Part 6


Part 7

As me, my spotter, and the rest of the bravo men were walking, the land seemed dim. I checked my watch. It was only 5 pm. It was nearly black out. There was fog everywhere and it was hard keeping up with the men. At 7 pm, we set up camp to rest for a few hours. We heard chainsaws out in the distance. By the time I got a glance at what was making the sound, half the men were dead.

I looked around in confusion. It was total pandemonium. I went for my riffle and shot where ever I heard the chainsaws come from. When it was quiet. The machine gunner was reloading his gun. There were only three of us now.

I looked around and saw some signs that said, "Welcome to the area known as Zombie House! <-----Home    Hell----->" The sign scared me so bad, that I nearly shot it. Over to the left quite a bit, there were two jeeps. Just as we started up the jeeps. The zombies charged at us. WILL THEY MAKE IT? WILL I EVEN MAKE PART 8!!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!?!!? I DON'T KNOW!
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Re: STORY PART 6!!!
« Reply #1 on: July 01, 2008, 01:25:32 pm »
Nice, you formed paragraphs and I could read it now xD
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Re: STORY PART 6!!!
« Reply #2 on: July 01, 2008, 02:34:51 pm »
What? It took you 3.5 hours to find a rock on the ground? Noone was guarding you... then you managed to get your hands on a gun, knife and water just scattered around like this?

Anyway, nice read @_@

Offline kniferknight95

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Re: STORY PART 6!!!
« Reply #3 on: July 01, 2008, 02:50:08 pm »
lol yup thats right besides dontcha wanna read part 7?!!?!?!?!?!!?!?!??!?!

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Re: STORY PART 6!!!
« Reply #4 on: July 01, 2008, 03:12:58 pm »
Lol, Intense :D But U should Do it for the Next Story, just edit it under the old one, or it's going to be taking way too many new topics.  I think the Geoligist tried to tell u that already :P
But good Story, I hope they survive :)

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Re: STORY PART 6!!!
« Reply #5 on: July 01, 2008, 03:19:13 pm »
Lol, Intense :D But U should Do it for the Next Story, just edit it under the old one, or it's going to be taking way too many new topics.  I think the Geoligist tried to tell u that already :P
But good Story, I hope they survive :)

Intense? I bet half the forumers don't even read whatever's written in the topic :D

Sure, I wanna read the next part, but as you were advised - write it in this topic, or create a new one with all chapters.


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Re: STORY PART 6!!!
« Reply #6 on: July 01, 2008, 06:59:17 pm »
Its nice..  You must have a lot of time on your hands! :D

Keep improving, it gets better every time.

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« Reply #7 on: July 01, 2008, 08:08:45 pm »
These stories are awsome! Fun to read :D

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Re: STORY PART 6!!!
« Reply #8 on: July 02, 2008, 04:23:04 am »
Gooooood... seems you got less spelling errors.  Keep it up!
So basically you got some good backup now?
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Re: STORY PART 6!!!
« Reply #9 on: July 05, 2008, 08:19:37 am »
I like these, they're sweet. Your writing kind've reminds me of the Halo books. I loved the Ash episodes. Great writing dude, I look forward to Part 7 :D

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Re: STORY PART 6!!!
« Reply #10 on: July 05, 2008, 08:37:25 am »
Clix

Read this
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« Reply #11 on: July 05, 2008, 01:43:01 pm »
As me and my spotter dropped our weapons, the Alpha team surrounded us. One of them ran and took our flag. The rest of them searched us for weapons. Nobody said anything. They gave us a gesture to keep moving or they'd blow our heads open.

After we left the ash area, it quickly began to get cooler. The cool air hitting my face felt good. I heard one of them chattering up ahead. He was talking to his gun. Thats when my spotter said. "We gotta get outta here" I tried thinking the situation over. There were five of them and two of us. The odds were against us.


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« Reply #12 on: July 06, 2008, 12:58:46 am »
You shouldnt use this thread to make part 7..

oh well. 

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Re: STORY (PART 7!!!)
« Reply #13 on: July 06, 2008, 11:48:56 am »
This is pure bullshit

I hope you choke and die in your sleep, I'll never get this time back. :/
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« Reply #14 on: July 06, 2008, 12:23:03 pm »
This is pure bullshinyfoo

I hope you choke and die in your sleep, I'll never get this time back. :/
haha
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Re: STORY (PART 7!!!)
« Reply #15 on: July 09, 2008, 06:31:26 am »
You gotta stop saying riffle. It ruins the moment :\