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Quote from: Thinkto urself on March 21, 2009, 07:14:37 pmMontageMon•tagea musical composed of fragments of music; a quick succession or burst of dialogue or of music and sound effects used to fill the gap in time of a play, opera, etc.EG: The Jonas Brothers sometimes make music montages.Gonna highlight everything that does not make sense, or wrong, because I didn't last time.and I thought they still didn't have enough.Enough Viagra?My backup's leaderBackup isn't something that you would use like that. EG: GUYS WE NEED BACKUP SERGEANT MCKINLEY EXPLODEDLOLOLOLOLListen soldiers, the control found something that the enemy have a new device recentlyWhaaaaa? I felt pathetic. There were only four enemies at the top of the hill, while there were twenty of us down the hill.Well why send two people when you have 20?"Havoc, I need a backup A.S.A.P.! I'm at the lower tunnel, and my partner's K.I.A.."Rough translation; "And my partner's killed in action" He's gonna get killed in action?The rook stared at me with the eye expressingSomeone else's eye isn't something you want to look at someone with.it was shaking with anger.You wouldn't say "it" if you're referring to your own limb. Not exactly wrong, but it sounds bad.Are you being inspired by SquirrelKing?Excuse me but are you trying to be a d**k because thats what it seems like. It was a good story and there is no need to pick it to pieces.
MontageMon•tagea musical composed of fragments of music; a quick succession or burst of dialogue or of music and sound effects used to fill the gap in time of a play, opera, etc.EG: The Jonas Brothers sometimes make music montages.Gonna highlight everything that does not make sense, or wrong, because I didn't last time.and I thought they still didn't have enough.Enough Viagra?My backup's leaderBackup isn't something that you would use like that. EG: GUYS WE NEED BACKUP SERGEANT MCKINLEY EXPLODEDLOLOLOLOLListen soldiers, the control found something that the enemy have a new device recentlyWhaaaaa? I felt pathetic. There were only four enemies at the top of the hill, while there were twenty of us down the hill.Well why send two people when you have 20?"Havoc, I need a backup A.S.A.P.! I'm at the lower tunnel, and my partner's K.I.A.."Rough translation; "And my partner's killed in action" He's gonna get killed in action?The rook stared at me with the eye expressingSomeone else's eye isn't something you want to look at someone with.it was shaking with anger.You wouldn't say "it" if you're referring to your own limb. Not exactly wrong, but it sounds bad.Are you being inspired by SquirrelKing?
and I thought they still didn't have enough.Enough Viagra?The rook stared at me with the eye expressingSomeone else's eye isn't something you want to look at someone with.Are you being inspired by SquirrelKing?
