New Instrumental

[jerich]

I haven't made any of these in awhile, and yesterday I decided to f around and made violin parts and harmonized it and I think I got something good going, but I feel like it might still be missing something. What do you guys think?

http://static.ak.fbcdn.net/rsrc.php/z4OG5/hash/7qkbs3nb.swf?v=522710364017&ev=0

[iDante]

It just seems like background noise to me. Nothing stands out or strikes me as good in it.

That being said it is pleasant and not terrible.

[Fryer]

I think it would sound better if there were some build-ups or something similar before going into the chorus, to give it more excitement about what's about to happen. Somewhere at or after the middle of the track a break could be used, like something kinda different from the rest of the track, but still something that fits the style. The ending chorus I think should have something from very early in the song that you've not heard again until then. Also about the instrumentation, it seems like some of the instruments sound a bit too similar to each other.
I'm not very good at music, so can't really give any pro-suggestions about it... But gl finishing it, sounds ok so far. =)