Rhymes II

[Foxconn]

NO TROLLING IN THIS THREAD.

This is what i done in some minutes. Some gangsta-ing

Im gonna extremely f**k up your life,
because i came to your house with a hunting knife.
I wake up only one time in the f**king year,
so im gonna rip off your heart, soul and ear.
Get ready for your death, you little whiny b***h.
Im gonna blast you if you will make an errant twitch.
That's f**king right! Cry some f**king more!
It wont help you! You just act like a wh***!
Here i am. The hope of many. Against the fur***ness.
Let's be against them! Let's begin the Madness!
With our pistols, rifles and shotguns, let's send them to Hell.
We will use all our sharp ammunition - Every bullet and Shell.
The cleansing has started. Enjoy the battle, boy!
Let's kill them and make them eat the f**king soil!

ANTIFURRIES! LET'S FIGHT AGAINST THE ENEMIES OF COMMON SENSE!

So many f**ks here...

...i hope i won't get banned for this.



FYI, more soon.

[MattH]

It was a gay wast of your time.

Profanity doesn't make you tough.

[Foxconn]

It's just rhyming.

I don't put any emotional stuff in my rhymes. I'm just playing with them.

[DarkCrusade]

No, this is truly neutral. If words could kill..

[L[0ne]R]

Ok, I'll assume you were actually serious when writing this, so here's serious critique, no trolling:

I hate to be rude, but this is really really bad. Why - because it's nothing but threats and swearing which "should" make you sound tough, cool, gangsta and so on, but the truth is that it sounds extremely lame and unoriginal.

If you like this kind of aggressive theme, then listen to some of the Linkin Park songs. Here's a good example:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FCIxz-A66Qg
(lyrics in the video description)



The definition of "cool" is NOT a mean face expression, shades, guns, violence, and lots of swearing. Being cool takes more than that. To be specific - it's being strong on the inside, not looking tough on the outside.

[demoniac93]

Ok, I'll assume you were actually serious when writing this, so here's serious critique, no trolling:

I hate to be rude, but this is really really bad. Why - because it's nothing but threats and swearing which "should" make you sound tough, cool, gangsta and so on, but the truth is that it sounds extremely lame and unoriginal.

If you like this kind of aggressive theme, then listen to some of the Linkin Park songs. Here's a good example:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FCIxz-A66Qg
(lyrics in the video description)



The definition of "cool" is NOT a mean face expression, shades, guns, violence, and lots of swearing. Being cool takes more than that. To be specific - it's being strong on the inside, not looking tough on the outside.

So basically, it's being Steven Segal.