Rhymes III

[Foxconn]

I'm reposting this cause i needed to fix something...and cause of echo's fucking ignorance.
Blah...let's get up to the business...


Desert Eagles are absolutely best!
Just fire few shots at the chest!
Campers didn't let you to jump high?
Slice them with your fancy MP5!
You got killed by such a wh***?
Bust her with the power of AK-74.
Someone totally made me laugh...
when he killed everyone with Steyr Aug!
Protip: To find a fancy lass
show her your nice SPAS.
There is no such weapon like Luger,
so you must use the Ruger.
Need a noobtube that does fine?
Pick the Hate Machine - M79
Wanna feel like the chosen one?
Select the M82A1!
Still need some huge assistance, Jimmy?
There's someone in your team with Minimi!
And the last gun - noobs use it for fun.
You know what it is? It's the minigun!
Killed by "[GWT] Pieprzony Kokon"?
The weirdest is that, that this polack used the US SOCOM.
And the biggest fun of your life:
Raping asses with a throwing knife.
I don't know anything that rhymes with SAW,
but here's something about M72 LAW.
Nah, screw it. It's useless and only for M79 ho's.
I just rhymed something to make you play soldat...

SOOO?!

[Monsteri]

I liked the knife part.

[Clawbug]

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rhyme

Read more, you might find the theory interesting. Good stuff still.

[DarkCrusade]

For a poet it's important to actually know the language he's using. You don't know English good enough, and that's why all your poems suck.

[Clawbug]

For a poet it's important to actually know the language he's using. You don't know English good enough, and that's why all your poems suck.

Not necessarily. Creative people always know their way when working with even the most minimalistic and primitive tools. It's as if you said that no one can create good works with MS Paint, let alone using only 16 colors. Or 2. The fact is, that there's always someone who can create amazing work under such limited conditions.

[DarkCrusade]

Not necessarily. Creative people always know their way when working with even the most minimalistic and primitive tools. It's as if you said that no one can create good works with MS Paint, let alone using only 16 colors. Or 2. The fact is, that there's always someone who can create amazing work under such limited conditions.

That almost sounds like an insult to Foxconn, as you compare Photoshop to MS Paint like a philosopher's mind with a retard's one. 

[croat1gamer]

The only thing that rhymes are the ending words, the composition of the song is utter crap and only a rapper would make a song like that. A horrible, generic rapper.

It is good in a manner that it includes Soldat, but that would be it. Artistic value, on the other hand, is -1.

[Clawbug]

The only thing that rhymes are the ending words, the composition of the song is utter crap and only a rapper would make a song like that. A horrible, generic rapper.

It is good in a manner that it includes Soldat, but that would be it. Artistic value, on the other hand, is -1.

Who ever said it was a song?

You don't know a thing about rhymes it seems! Go ahead and read the whole article: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rhyme

[GhostRiderSwiss]

im leading with 3 other guys in swiss a music label (for actually mainly House music(Electronic/dance) but we also produce hip hop /rap cauze we have such ppl in that label.

all what matters on that "rhyme" is how long he had for when u spited that in like 30 mins then its pro - but if u had around 1 week to come that far .. then its not so impressive =P

still i like the theme - cauze its soldat xD

oh and do u ppls know that Counterstrike Flavour ? its a actually german rhyme about counterstrike, but those 2 guys creating it was very successfull with i guess they had 10 milions views on youtube (95% thumbed up)

if u would know the text - atleast u could go for and translate it quick or maybe is there already a english version of it.

but what i try to say go check that out and create something like that....would rock ... oh and if u rly wanna create that - i could spend the beat for it one of my beats i've create with the Skiller - crew (swiss rap label)

Greets GhostRider - aka GreenFlavour (artist name)

[croat1gamer]

Who ever said it was a song?

You don't know a thing about rhymes it seems! Go ahead and read the whole article: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rhyme

Lyrics, w/e. My english vocab. is horrible as of lately.

I know about rhymes, but i was trying to refer to the fact that it just doesnt sound well when being recited/read/similar.
+ the renaissance here loved dodecasyllables rhymed on the 6th and 12th syllable, which, after being the main thing you learn for more than a year, makes everything else look wrongly composed.

[Mittsu]

Desert Eagles are absolutely best!
Just fire few shots at the chest!

But what if the enemy is lagging like s**t
You can aim like a pro and still get no hit

Campers didn't let you to jump high?
Slice them with your fancy MP5!

Just watch as everyone turns to be MP5 haters
You won't even get a chance to tell them "laters!"

You got killed by such a wh***?
Bust her with the power of AK-74.

Bust but not kill, with that low shooting rate
Before you can kill her it's already too late

Someone totally made me laugh...
when he killed everyone with Steyr Aug!

Which is indeed a damn funny case
To kill many with that crap, it sounds like a craze

Protip: To find a fancy lass
show her your nice SPAS.

Just face a weapon with a longer range
And the lass will make her preferences to change

There is no such weapon like Luger,
so you must use the Ruger.

Use it, shoot it, turn on the heat
They still live, what the f**k? well, it's called an eat

Need a noobtube that does fine?
Pick the Hate Machine - M79

And just as quick as your tube is picked
You'll get a message "you have been votekicked"

Wanna feel like the chosen one?
Select the M82A1!

But you'd rather not choose it in realistic
With the bink you have no use with that goddamn stick

Still need some huge assistance, Jimmy?
There's someone in your team with Minimi!

And as that someone starts to f**king spray
All the teammates ahead should strongly pray

And the last gun - noobs use it for fun.
You know what it is? It's the minigun!

It's the most useless gun in the entire game
When people lag with that gun, it starts to get lame

Killed by "[GWT] Pieprzony Kokon"?
The weirdest is that, that this polack used the US SOCOM.

That little pistol won't help him much
He'd get killed by anyone at the first touch

And the biggest fun of your life:
Raping asses with a throwing knife.

And while all these asses you're furiously beating
"You have been kicked from console for possible cheating"

I don't know anything that rhymes with SAW,
but here's something about M72 LAW.

You fail to shoot the LAW when you accidentally roll
And the saw, well, its used mainly by people to troll


ahh now it has more soldat feel to it

no offense to any guns, love them all

[Foxconn]

Understood. Nice stuff