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Offline jettlarue

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Outside the Cliff
« on: November 26, 2006, 03:23:21 am »
Hey, well I wrote a poem for school I would like for you to know what you all think of it. It is handwritten so sorry if there is some problem reading it. There was originally 3 pages but i put the 2nd and third together to upload onto soldatforums. Well ok please tell me what you think, its a bit dark maybe, hopefully not too much.
EDIT:Changed contrast for easier reading.
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Offline jrgp

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Re: Outside the Cliff
« Reply #1 on: November 26, 2006, 03:30:31 am »
sorry, but I can't, and I doubt others can, read it.

Please type it, if you want us to read it.
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Offline The Red Guy

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Re: Outside the Cliff
« Reply #2 on: November 26, 2006, 03:35:22 am »
And I thought my handwriting was unreadable.
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Offline Wolf_Man

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Re: Outside the Cliff
« Reply #3 on: November 26, 2006, 04:25:02 am »
It is very readible Jett, but it is too long and i dont feel like reading it, considering ill fall asleep, not of boredom, but of tiredness.
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Re: Outside the Cliff
« Reply #4 on: November 26, 2006, 08:41:36 am »
That's a poem?
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