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Offline Joanna

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Machinegun-Bunker
« on: February 23, 2007, 06:09:33 am »
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Offline Slayer DZ

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Re: Machinegun-Bunker
« Reply #1 on: February 23, 2007, 08:35:22 am »
looks like...i can't describe it, maybe like... a dish for food with blue cover,aaaaaaah don't know really, anyway, all together it's UGLY

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Re: Machinegun-Bunker
« Reply #2 on: February 23, 2007, 02:10:01 pm »
Totally one word:
SUCKS!
O rly?

Offline M.rSnow

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Re: Machinegun-Bunker
« Reply #3 on: February 23, 2007, 02:15:41 pm »
ehhh? What?! This is supposed to be a stationary? In case it s*cks
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Re: Machinegun-Bunker
« Reply #4 on: February 23, 2007, 04:39:16 pm »
Alright, I am going to give you constructive criticism.

Now, the title says that it is supposed to be a machinegun bunker, so I'll revolve around that.
I am guessing that the blue thing on the top is the machinegun.

First, the machinegun needs to look like an actual machine gun. I can't really describe what it looks like right now. Also, the bowl shape thing I am assuming is the bunker. You might want to make it sandbags or identifiably concrete.
You need to add shading so it doesn't look flat. You should make the bottom wider than the top, also.

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Re: Machinegun-Bunker
« Reply #5 on: March 19, 2007, 11:35:06 pm »
nice try but 2 things
. bunkers dont have blue glass windows (the window are to dark to)
.its a salad bowl

try something smal next time if ur using paint
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