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Offline Laser Guy

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« on: May 13, 2007, 07:36:59 am »
Ok, so I kinda tried to make my own map, located somewhere in jungle...

http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w75/LightVader/dm_indajungla.jpg
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Offline jrgp

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Re: dm_indajungla
« Reply #1 on: May 13, 2007, 08:11:08 am »
IMO the map is way too dark. That extreme difference between the very dark map and those very bright buildings is annoying.

Layout isn't exactly bad, but it is extremely basic. Nothing special. Scenery placement is alright.
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Offline Laser Guy

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Re: dm_indajungla
« Reply #2 on: May 13, 2007, 08:21:24 am »
sry, my first made up map (not modified one, from some1 else))

Date Posted: May 13, 2007, 12:20:47 pm
PS My dad likes Metallica too (he is 42)
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Re: dm_indajungla
« Reply #3 on: May 13, 2007, 08:33:28 am »
Don't be sorry, just try harder next time. The map isn't too bad, I just am not very fond of it's visuals.

And, oh yeah, Metallica Rules!
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Offline Laser Guy

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Re: dm_indajungla
« Reply #4 on: May 13, 2007, 08:36:34 am »
anywa, the buildings arelight inside cuz the lights are on, but i can make the walls darker...
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Re: dm_indajungla
« Reply #5 on: May 13, 2007, 09:41:34 am »
Now, now is nice! i love that map
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Re: dm_indajungla
« Reply #6 on: May 13, 2007, 11:52:51 am »
Map rox, Great job
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Offline Laser Guy

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Re: dm_indajungla
« Reply #7 on: May 13, 2007, 12:38:02 pm »
Quote from: jrgp on May 13, 2007, 08:11:08 am
IMO the map is way too dark. That extreme difference between the very dark map and those very bright buildings is annoying.

Layout isn't exactly bad, but it is extremely basic. Nothing special. Scenery placement is alright.
ok and what should my layout be like??
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Offline iDante

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Re: dm_indajungla
« Reply #8 on: May 13, 2007, 01:46:40 pm »
Try to include something unique in your layout, this looks like any other map.
Like jrgp said, there is too much contrast between the BG and the buildings, darken them or lighten the bg.
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Offline Laser Guy

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Re: dm_indajungla
« Reply #9 on: May 13, 2007, 01:54:42 pm »
and what would be unique is my question?? a big cross in the middle!?!
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Offline iDante

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Re: dm_indajungla
« Reply #10 on: May 13, 2007, 01:59:14 pm »
Unique is where you use your imagination and come up wiht something that sets it apart. I can't tell you how.
PS get rid of that little tiny room beneath the big building. It detracts from the speed of the map.
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Offline Laser Guy

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Re: dm_indajungla
« Reply #11 on: May 13, 2007, 02:04:15 pm »
what do u mean?
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Offline Keron Cyst

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Re: dm_indajungla
« Reply #12 on: May 13, 2007, 07:02:13 pm »
The basement to the big building at the bottom
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Re: dm_indajungla
« Reply #13 on: May 13, 2007, 08:07:10 pm »
I like this map, but one thing really sticks out to me is the building's light poly colors. Darkening it slightly to befit the dark surroundings will help.
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Offline Laser Guy

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Re: dm_indajungla
« Reply #14 on: May 13, 2007, 09:04:20 pm »
Ok, i c everyone wants me to darken the buildings some, and how does the basement detract from the speed of the map ???
« Last Edit: May 14, 2007, 09:57:56 am by Laser Guy »
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Re: dm_indajungla
« Reply #15 on: May 14, 2007, 12:30:31 am »
The basement's good. The color of the walls is dark enough.
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