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« on: May 28, 2007, 11:36:11 am »
Don't you guys remember my old map? Here, This is the topic http://forums.soldat.pl/index.php?topic=1921.0
It was a good map, some people liked, I think I had 2 people download.
The tower looked crappy, and it had no proper texture stretching.. Well I'm here to tell you I revised it!! The new and improved terrorism map!! I used VTT's vegetation pack, it came in handy, plus you need it to not get any scenery missing.

I hope you enjoy it!
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Re: Dm_Terrorism
« Reply #1 on: May 28, 2007, 11:43:41 am »
Looks nice now. I might actually DL it.

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Re: Dm_Terrorism
« Reply #2 on: May 28, 2007, 12:24:07 pm »
The trees don't match the dark atmosphere. Darken them all heavily, or use the default tree graphics instead—they would be much better on a map like this. What are those lights doing attached beneath natural boulders? :P
The layout is poor, particularly for DM. You want movement to be easily circulating, like the Arenas, MrSnowman, Rok, etc.

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Re: Dm_Terrorism
« Reply #3 on: May 28, 2007, 01:51:35 pm »
I'm not jungle obsessed.. I'm just correcting some of my crappy maps.. :)
And I will darken the trees more :)
I thought it was circulating, They are no places to be trapped, correct me if I'm wrong.

EDIT:I made the lights there, because you know how sometimes, you have lights, hidden in rocks or camouflaged as rocks, you may have seen them before, but there in places like in carnivals, when its dark.
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Re: Dm_Terrorism
« Reply #4 on: May 28, 2007, 02:17:08 pm »
Top-left, top-right, top-middle... the map just doesn't flow very well at all. The building is a chokepoint which you must pass through to get anywhere, and "anywhere" in this case is a dead-end. Those kinds of chokepoints should be reserved for trench-warfare.

At the very least, make a cut at the top-middle so players can get from the left side to the right without going through the building, for example. Even that wouldn't be enough, possibly

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Re: Dm_Terrorism
« Reply #5 on: May 28, 2007, 03:06:33 pm »
Laser Guy, Are you mad at me or something...

EDIT: Im sorry if I acted rude :-[ Its just it seemed like you wanted to correct me to see show how foolish I was, What, isn't that what correcting is all about? nvm, Correct me man! :D I wanna see what I can improve on
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Re: Dm_Terrorism
« Reply #6 on: May 28, 2007, 03:40:47 pm »
lol, u understood me wrong, nvm... but the top-middle seems kinda dull, maybe a tunnel or something?
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Re: Dm_Terrorism
« Reply #7 on: May 28, 2007, 03:52:34 pm »
Yeah, a tunnel there would help flow a lot.

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Re: Dm_Terrorism
« Reply #8 on: May 28, 2007, 04:09:16 pm »
how about this, not sure about the bottom mid, but i was just trying to help
EDIT: and i think move it just a tad right if you can, left side looks a little bigger (IF YOU CAN)

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Re: Dm_Terrorism
« Reply #9 on: May 28, 2007, 04:14:19 pm »
I knida played with the map a bit, just a tiny bit, and what u think??

Date Posted: May 28, 2007, 08:12:29 PM
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Re: Dm_Terrorism
« Reply #10 on: May 28, 2007, 04:17:26 pm »
lol i never attach my images, thats just the screenshot of it
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Re: Dm_Terrorism
« Reply #11 on: May 28, 2007, 04:43:45 pm »
I like what lazergoy did to it, keeps it simple yet looks good. This map reminds me of death/death2 a lot...

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Re: Dm_Terrorism
« Reply #12 on: May 28, 2007, 04:48:55 pm »
I like that, Lazer guy! Very nice! Please, attach the map! I want to play on that!

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Re: Dm_Terrorism
« Reply #13 on: May 28, 2007, 04:55:29 pm »
sry, I do have a copy of the map on screenshot but... It is up to ds dude if u should attach the dla or not, since it is his map
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Re: Dm_Terrorism
« Reply #14 on: May 28, 2007, 06:12:43 pm »
Sry but none of ur maps has got some nice routes+ideas or sth. else....They are just still dull i think! Try to bring in some unique/sepcial ideas! That would be cool!

PS: U r a crazy "spam-map-maker" u r uploading mostly every day 1 map dude...Do u doesn´t have to do other things?!?!
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Re: Dm_Terrorism
« Reply #15 on: May 28, 2007, 06:16:35 pm »
I knida played with the map a bit, just a tiny bit, and what u think??

Date Posted: May 28, 2007, 08:12:29 PM
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Thats good laser Guy  :D Thanks for helping me out.

Date Posted: May 28, 2007, 07:15:30 PM
Sry but none of ur maps has got some nice routes+ideas or sth. else....They are just still dull i think! Try to bring in some unique/sepcial ideas! That would be cool!

EDIT: PS: U r a crazy "spam-map-maker" u r uploading mostly every day 1 map dude...Do u doesn´t have to do other things?!?!
I was thinking that too.. I';m gonna spend more time on my maps, making 1 good one, instead of 100 crappy ones
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Re: Dm_Terrorism
« Reply #16 on: May 28, 2007, 06:53:19 pm »
PS: U r a crazy "spam-map-maker" u r uploading mostly every day 1 map dude...Do u doesn´t have to do other things?!?!

i did it for 2-3 days though, once 2 in a day, den, IMEDATLY WORKED DEN2, then thelair, then next day icey devil and such

i think u could improve ds, i think i could improve, we just have to work hard, and not take 5 minutes on a map xD
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Re: Dm_Terrorism
« Reply #17 on: May 29, 2007, 08:22:47 am »
I knida played with the map a bit, just a tiny bit, and what u think??

Date Posted: May 28, 2007, 08:12:29 PM
PS Use PNG format nex time, fireblade212
Thats good laser Guy :D Thanks for helping me out.

Date Posted: May 28, 2007, 07:15:30 PM
Sry but none of ur maps has got some nice routes+ideas or sth. else....They are just still dull i think! Try to bring in some unique/sepcial ideas! That would be cool!

EDIT: PS: U r a crazy "spam-map-maker" u r uploading mostly every day 1 map dude...Do u doesn´t have to do other things?!?!
I was thinking that too.. I';m gonna spend more time on my maps, making 1 good one, instead of 100 crappy ones
u want to receive a copy of the PMS file of the moded map? I'm gonna PM it to u if u do.

Date Posted: May 29, 2007, 09:02:02 AM
to think bout it, be could make a team! j/k ;)
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Re: Dm_Terrorism
« Reply #18 on: June 19, 2007, 07:33:42 pm »
why is this called terrorism? is this the map where terrorists plan their devious ways? O_o...anyways, 3 out of 5.
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