The Perfect Strike

[Ender Wiggin]

The night is getting old. I glance at my watch; its just two minutes until the plan goes down. I'm a bit nervous; my carefully coordinated assault is about to begin, and I always get excited at the thought of battle. Maybe I shouldn't have eaten that second granola bar...

I check myself over once again, going through my mental checklist to make sure everything is as it should be. Jet boots? Check. Full supply of grenades? Check. Heckler and Koch MP5? Cleaned and fully loaded. Assault knife? Stashed away in a pants pocket to be called for later. I glance back to my watch. 0200. Its go time.

I quietly issue the go command, my voice echoing through my comrades' secure radios. We all spring into action simultaneously, working as one well lubricated machine; we are no longer individuals, becoming part of an elaborate dance of perfect maneuvering and deadly accurate weapons fire. There is no need to speak; each member's part is know frontwards and backwards, and he executes it with perfect precision.

Our first target is the entrance to alpha base, located near the top of the target warehouse and now heavily guarded by fresh bravo recruits straight from the academy. Our attack falls with hurricane force, with my trusty MP5 raining death from above while my wingman takes cover and proceeds to pick them off with his Scoped M82A1 Barret rifle. The bewildered bravo forces give up all thought of retaliation and turn to flee, tripping over each other in their haste to escape the devastation of C team's mini gun and minimi barrage. Most perish before they can make it five yards. None escape without critical damage.

The first stage over, I permit the team ten seconds of rest. While they reload and stock up on grenades, I picture in my mind the scene down in the warehouse at the bottom of the hill. By the end of our "break", the entire bravo team will be completely respawned, and ready to take us on. Perfect. Precision timing is always a key part of my plans, and my teammates know that their break is just another component that will lead to the successful completion of our goals.

Its time. We move off without a word, already knowing in our minds the next step of the battle. Teams C and D now organize themselves into a suppressing fire squad, made up of an assortment of miniguns, LAWs, and snipers. They plant themselves just past the edge of the underground tunnel, and at the cusp of the hill. They immediately begin the barrage. Bravo team is caught completely by surprise yet again, and are throw into a state of confusion.

Meanwhile, I work my way through the underground tunnel, leading my two small teams of highly trained commandos. Knives only are out; we wouldn't want to give away our position until the time is ripe. We meet little resistance; the only guard we find dies with a knife in his chest before he can utter a word. As we sneak around to the back of the warehouse, I can hear the sounds of ricocheting bullets all around me, and the cries of agony as bravo soldiers are dying all over the map. I speak quickly into my headset, giving the order to cease fire. As quickly as it started, the Armageddon ends, and my cover team works their way back up the hill and into the trap position. Meanwhile, I wait until Bravo charges after them, and then sneak into the warehouse and grab the flag. Cries of dismay go up around the field, as Bravo realizes that the trap has been sprung.

The chase is on now. I hurry down the secret passage, tightly gripping my prize. My team takes up positions of cover behind me, willing to sacrifice themselves for the good of the mission. Up to the top of the passage I go, never looking back. I emerge to find my shield wall intact; C and D teams have done their jobs perfectly. I must remember to mention it after the mission.

I proceed to the heart of my base, and firmly place the flag next to our own. Alpha Scores! The lights dim, the game ends. We have won once again, having firmly defeated an enemy that outnumbered us by more than three. My men are high on the spoils of victory. I remember now why I have come to love Soldat. I remember why it will always hold a special place in my heart. I raise my hand and shout to my men "Today, we have Victory!"

[Clow]

Keep writing these stories i love em!!!

Great job on this one it symbolizes why soldat is so great of a game.

[NinjaGimp369]

Agreed, your quite an author. Keep em comin'!

[recruit]

man why can all soldatens be like that? A team! I am definitely not the best player but i give the cover fire for the team! However in the end they let me die there on my own...

[Gortaak]

man why can all soldatens be like that? A team! I am definitely not the best player but i give the cover fire for the team! However in the end they let me die there on my own...

Such is life in soldat. That will only make you stronger, to become a one man army.

[excruciator]

nice man, you are quite a writer...maybe soldat forum need  a section just for you 

[T-Bone]

lol that was funny! i mean it wasnt supposed to be,it was just funny in a proffesional-authory sort of way

[katheb]

Respect

[SirJamesaford]

Wow man... nice.

[Paintd]

I said I wouldn't read another Ender Wiggin thread, but I just had to see how gay it was.

After the first line "I glanced at my watch" I knew you would take about an hour or so to GET TO THE POINT.

Writing your Soldat moment is like writing a news article. You don't need to be too descriptive. You need to be brief or else no one is going to read it. There are hundreds of threads out there. Why would they spend the time to read yours?

Apparently people have read this, and that's because they like to spend the extra time to sit on their lazy asses and watch the screen for days.

[Ender Wiggin]

I said I wouldn't read another Ender Wiggin thread, but I just had to see how gay it was.

That was your first mistake. First, going against your own intuition is never a good sign. Second, would you care to explain how a thread can have homosexual tendencies? Or is it just extremely happy?

After the first line "I glanced at my watch" I knew you would take about an hour or so to GET TO THE POINT.

And yet you continued to read the entire article, and waste your time writing a reply. If you felt that it was such a waste of time, why did you CONTINUE to waste your time? As far as the story taking too long, there are two possible explanations. First, you are a prepubescent kid who has ADD, and can't sit still for more than few minutes. The second, and more likely option in my opinion, is that you are a highschool dropout who cannot read too well, hence the reason it takes you so long to read a few paragraphs.

Writing your Soldat moment is like writing a news article. You don't need to be too descriptive.

Says who? I read the rules, and they don't seem to mention anything like this. Seeing as how you are new here, I am going to go out on a small limb and say that you just pulled this out of your ass.

You need to be brief or else no one is going to read it. There are hundreds of threads out there. Why would they spend the time to read yours?

First off, at any given moment there are less than 20 threads that are within easy access. No one is going to go digging through the archives to find a good soldat moment thread to read, especially if it is only a few lines long. Second, they would spend the time to read mine because they are interesting, engaging, and stand out from the rest of the crowd. It's like looking at a crowd of people walking down the street, and focusing on the hot babe in the red dress because she stands out from the crowd.

Apparently people have read this, and that's because they like to spend the extra time to sit on their lazy asses and watch the screen for days.

Once again, I think you may have reading trouble, especially if it takes you days to read my posts. Also, you are pointing out the obvious that people have read this. Look at the page views, the replys, and the fact that you read it as well! So if they read it and replied, and that constitutes "sitting on their lazy asses", and you read it and replied as well, doesn't that mean that you too are "sitting on" your lazy ass?

I must say, for someone who thinks so highly of himself, you come across as rather stupid. Next time you post, think about what you have to say, and make sure that your argument isn't a steaming pile of bullshit.

Thank you, and have a great day!

[Espadon]

Well said, Wig. I agree with you wholeheartedly!

[Crzy8s]

Here, Here!

[Clow]

I jsut have to say this lol....Paintd u just got OWNED!!! FCKIN UBER OWNAGE TO THE FACE!!!

[Paintd]

I said I wouldn't read another Ender Wiggin thread, but I just had to see how gay it was.

That was your first mistake. First, going against your own intuition is never a good sign. Second, would you care to explain how a thread can have homosexual tendencies? Or is it just extremely happy?
Mmhm. It beats around the bush. Has no meaning to it. And wow, zomg, i went against my own intuition, now i'm gonna be ownzord! Pffft, superstitions...

After the first line "I glanced at my watch" I knew you would take about an hour or so to GET TO THE POINT.

And yet you continued to read the entire article, and waste your time writing a reply. If you felt that it was such a waste of time, why did you CONTINUE to waste your time? As far as the story taking too long, there are two possible explanations. First, you are a prepubescent kid who has ADD, and can't sit still for more than few minutes. The second, and more likely option in my opinion, is that you are a highschool dropout who cannot read too well, hence the reason it takes you so long to read a few paragraphs.
Who told you that I read the whole damn thing? And your assumptions are false. You are a VIRGIN, you are 50, and you are A LOSER. Stop spending your life on Soldat.

Writing your Soldat moment is like writing a news article. You don't need to be too descriptive.

Says who? I read the rules, and they don't seem to mention anything like this. Seeing as how you are new here, I am going to go out on a small limb and say that you just pulled this out of your ass.
You are as much as new as I am. As a matter of fact, you are NEWER than I am. That obviously makes you a dropout teenager or a kid, right?

You need to be brief or else no one is going to read it. There are hundreds of threads out there. Why would they spend the time to read yours?

First off, at any given moment there are less than 20 threads that are within easy access. No one is going to go digging through the archives to find a good soldat moment thread to read, especially if it is only a few lines long. Second, they would spend the time to read mine because they are interesting, engaging, and stand out from the rest of the crowd. It's like looking at a crowd of people walking down the street, and focusing on the hot babe in the red dress because she stands out from the crowd.
Nice, you quoted Matrix. Why? Because you can't think of a fucking one yourself. Prove that this one is more interesting than the other threads.

Apparently people have read this, and that's because they like to spend the extra time to sit on their lazy asses and watch the screen for days.

Once again, I think you may have reading trouble, especially if it takes you days to read my posts. Also, you are pointing out the obvious that people have read this. Look at the page views, the replys, and the fact that you read it as well! So if they read it and replied, and that constitutes "sitting on their lazy asses", and you read it and replied as well, doesn't that mean that you too are "sitting on" your lazy ass?
No, again, I didn't read the goddamn fag rag, and tell me the line where it says I did.
I must say, for someone who thinks so highly of himself, you come across as rather stupid. Next time you post, think about what you have to say, and make sure that your argument isn't a steaming pile of bull****.
I come across as rather stupid? Perhaps I would look smarter if I posted more adjectives? Or talked like a British man? I don't come on the internet to be smart - that's your mistake, and that's where you've fucked up your life and became a boring son of a jew.
Thank you, and have a great day!
Wow, you're so professional. Posting 'uber ownage' noob pwning threads, and treating replies like customers. This should be your job. Actually, no, this is your LIFE.

To all those who said "zomg wigger u owns", get the fuck out if you're not going to contribute to this thread. It just proves how Wigger can't defend for himself.

[Ender Wiggin]

Yea, this is getting to be so much fun and everything, but you are ruining the thread for no reason whatsoever. I am not quite sure why you decided to pick on me, but perhaps you are jealous that your soldat moments suck and that mine don't?

Ah well. Such is the nature of the internet. By now your posts are basically just "you are stupid you are dumb blah blah blah ****** **** *** *** *** ***", so I am not going to argue with you anymore.

[Toumaz]

Apparently people have read this, and that's because they like to spend the extra time to sit on their lazy asses and watch the screen for days.

Or because we actually enjoy his writing and wants to read it through. If you haven't read it yourself then don't even bother criticising him.

A bit more on topic: Amazingly written story and I really did enjoy reading it. Loads better than the everyday "zomg i got a duble kill" topics in this section. Keep it up. :)

[iDante]

Yes I agree with Toumaz, your writing style is very enjoyable. While Paintd is a little true about it dragging on a bit, its really not a problem.

[Blue-ninja]

Dying on my own while trying to cover Bravo team has taught me to be a melee master. And the aspects of returning the flag and capping.

[.Long-Range]

Once again, a beautifully written piece which I fully enjoyed reading.
Can someone please get rid of Paintd? All he does is complain and bitch. Damn.