DM Hellbound

[LordDB]

My first map release. Be nice

Took several painstaking hours waypointing. No team spawns because certain spawn points would give certain teams an advantage, so it's a free for all! Waypointed for maximum bot mobility. No stuck bots testing it w/ 10 bots on the same team for 30 minutes.

Any comments or feedback, particularly negative feedback would be GREATLY appreciated. Thanks for the look

edit 2: Re-released with some major aesthetic changes. I decided to keep the red. It is, after all, supposed to be hellish. Fixed some polybugs. I don't see anymore. Also added a pointflag.

overview:

[iDante]

I see the attachment just fine.

About the map:
Layout is decent, nothing special. 8/10 for that. A few polygons are a bit spiky for my liking.
Shading looks nice and is overall pretty good. Some places are a bit dull, but overall shading is a 9/10.
Scenery is the biggest problem. The moon and col scenery are good, but the vegetation is just too red. 6/10 for those.

Overall I'd say its pretty nice, especially for a first: 7.5/10.

[jrgp]

This is excellent for a first map. Scenery usage looks pretty good, but in a few places the opacity is so low that I can barely see them. Shading looks pretty good. I don't mind the map being mostly red. looks pretty good IMO.

[strogluns]

This map is lovely...
I 'm happy to see good new DM maps and mappers!!!
Continue dude

[wedding]

Map looks pretty good, i like the shading and the scenery-placement! But I don´t like maps with so much hight-difference cuz this is not real good for the gameplay but nevertheless map is very well! Keep up workin. Btw: Very good for first map!

GRTZ:

[AdkZ] -=BuTcH3r=-

[LordDB]

Thanks all for the feedback. I made this map intentionally vertical biased as an incentive to get up high so other players/bots don't rain down death on you.

As far as the scenery, yea, I guess it is a little too red. I haven't yet figured out how to change opacity, all scenery was just tinted full red.

Now that I'm getting used to polyworks, I can churn these maps out much faster. More to come...

Lord DB

[iDante]

As far as the scenery, yea, I guess it is a little too red. I haven't yet figured out how to change opacity, all scenery was just tinted full red.

Opacity is in the same window as the color selector.

[Will]

The default opacity level is 100, you can change it by tying the number :O

[Demonic]

You could ditch the cactuses, and to make a smoother circular route, create a tunnel through the top right platform. Less agressive red colouring, try a better texture, and you've got a great map.

[LordDB]

Opacity is in the same window as the color selector.

The default opacity level is 100, you can change it by tying the number :O

Oh. now I feel dumb.

[The Specialist]

This is a really nice job for your first map.  The colors may be a little too red, but other then that, I find this map to be quite great.

[LordDB]

*poke* Re-released with some changes, I guess I can't really call this my first map anymore, having put the experience of making two more maps into this one First post has been updated w/ changes. Enjoy

[~Niko~]

Yeah... nice map for be a first. Good layout and scenery... put a 1x1 black Scenery out and close the map like this:    9/10

[Blacksheepboy]

Even though this was bumped from about a month ago ...[and I have no life since I'm still up posting]...

Doing that black thing to this map would be pretty garbage. The map is pretty nice as is. It wasn't meant to be underground or cave-like so stop bumping old maps! At least take some time to look at the date of the original post before going on and posting on 20 million old threads.