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Need Help Finalizing
« on: June 14, 2007, 08:25:34 pm »
ctf_Houses_On_Hills

I've been working on a map for the past 3 days, and I'm pretty close to finishing. I just want some feed-back from you professionals, and was wondering if anyone could help me out with waypointing said map.







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Date Posted: June 14, 2007, 11:23:25 AM
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Sorry, I just need some answers! I made a second map and was wondering about the color scheme. I'm going for a snow level, and I think I have it right. If anyone has anyother palette suggestions, however, I'd greatly appreciate it.



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Re: Need Help Finalizing
« Reply #1 on: June 15, 2007, 12:35:04 am »
Trash that orange! The rest of the map looks all right, I guess, but it could be better if you used smooth fade effects at the edges of the shadows underneath the boulders instead of flatly halting it at the ends of columns
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Re: Need Help Finalizing
« Reply #2 on: June 17, 2007, 08:41:46 pm »
Snowfalls

Continued working on Snowfalls and was wondering about the color scheme again. I'm going for a snow level, and I think I have it right this time. Can anyone download and test it for errors?

Sorry the pic looks bad, I only have paint  :(



I'm also still wondering if anyone has any suggestions about Houses On Hills?

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Re: Need Help Finalizing
« Reply #3 on: June 19, 2007, 10:43:49 am »
What odd scenery... anyways, I feel that the blue is too saturated. Try to go for a more ambient cobalt, or blue-gray. That would be excellent.

As for ctf_Houses On Hills, it seems like it ought to be Inf. But one prominent suggestion in my mind is: never make background colors completely black! Even if you want to achieve an eerie midnight effect, you can do better with varying contrasts than just flat black, which is just boring.
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Re: Need Help Finalizing
« Reply #4 on: June 19, 2007, 01:24:58 pm »
Well, Snowfalls I've already released here. But I'll change the back ground to a little darker blue.

As for Houses on Hills, I have a star scenery behind it for a midnidht feel. Should I remove that first and go with gray?
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