Greenland (DM)

[biggleZ]

Map Greenland (Deathmatch)
Waypoints added

Ok a vote!

1st

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2st

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3st

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download link:
http://rapidshare.com/files/39867508/Greenland.zip.html (do not download before vote)

Comment wich one u want to be Greenland (1st , 2st or 3st)

[~Niko~]

What the hell is it? You need to put in scenery and lock the area! Colour better the polygons and add colliders and shades. This never can be played in any server 
See my guide for more information of how make maps:
:RAR Guide: http://www.4shared.com/file/18598775/cb2636c/guide.html
.Zip Guide: http://www.4shared.com/file/18598721/76a85330/guide.html

Please SEE the guide and understand this: That map never can be added in a server for be played, please remake it 

[biggleZ]

maybe not in your server
contiue try giveing out guides i bet u never even playd the map..

[fireblade212]

contiue try giveing out guides i bet u never even playd the map..

not trying to be mean but
who would? it has no scenery, shading is ok, could use some color

 your 2 maps need alot of work, this maps layout is alot better, you dont nessiccary have to lock the arena, i kind of like it, but add scnery fix texture give it tad more color and it might be a good map

[-Skykanden-]

Shadding ok? That's a joke, fireblade?
He is sadded it, but not good, and o please don't put more sceneries the map is full of that things eh!

[wedding]

OMG....Nothin more to say!!!!

[fireblade212]

Shadding ok? That's a joke, fireblade?

i liek that style of shading

[phoood]

I'd play it, but it's a rapidshare link .

[~Niko~]

New version, totally remaked (Scenery and shades) Now it's funny to play. Enjoy! I remaked it (Niko) 

[fireblade212]

ooooo i would hate if some1 did this to my map i was working on

[wedding]

Do not make more maps before you made some tuts!!! They ARE DULL!!! Get some ideas+Layout-examples from other maps!!

[~Niko~]

Do not make more maps before you made some tuts!!! They ARE DULL!!! Get some ideas+Layout-examples from other maps!!

Yeah... see more maps and get the great inspiration...

And the re-compile gives to the map some "grass"

And I vote the map Nº3

[The Specialist]

Map Version 3 gets my vote.  My comments on it are the same for your previous ones.  You need to have better polygon work with it and the scenery needs to match the map environment as well as its shading, which there is none.  Eitherway, it looks fun to play with 6 people on deathmatch.

[-Skykanden-]

i vote for the 3rd map

ehmm, your maps need, anything called by esceneries

[Temp3st]

Yes... um... they look a little bare

[Mothafix]

Shadding ok? That's a joke, fireblade?
He is sadded it, but not good, and o please don't put more sceneries the map is full of that things eh!

Shading doesn't have to mega über hyper realistic to make map good.
Just wondering how you people can play default maps because some of them aren't perfectly shaded.

New version, totally remaked (Scenery and shades) Now it's funny to play. Enjoy! I remaked it (Niko)

Did you even ask if you can remake it? Btw the trees are too bright and don't fit there.
And why you spam your guide in every topic when people can just go here?
+ Don't revive old topics like in Mapping help/resources, it's not nice.
Number 2 is the best

[biggleZ]

3st  WINS!!

screenshot:

[Blacksheepboy]

contiue try giveing out guides i bet u never even playd the map..

not trying to be mean but
who would? it has no scenery, shading is ok, could use some color

 your 2 maps need alot of work, this maps layout is alot better, you dont nessiccary have to lock the arena, i kind of like it, but add scnery fix texture give it tad more color and it might be a good map

[pretend I quoted the first couple comments as well]

Geeze what a way to bash him. If you want to comment or critique someone's map, don't say things like, "who would ever add this to their server," "what the hell is this?" and crap like that. Add constructive critism, don't bash people to death .

Alright, I know I did sorta remake one of his maps but, I never released it out to the public [although I should've just pmed him the critism in the first place]. Don't remake other people's maps and then go on to release it even if their map was poorly done. I personally thought the map was fine to begin with. All it needs is a lotta changes .

BiggleZ, although the map isn't the greatest, it was in some ways, an improvement from your last. Although I'd have to download this to find out, it looks like you connected the vertices better and now you seem to be getting the idea. You obviously know how to shade, although it could use some work. All in all, you are improving, just keep workin at it and use other peoples maps as examples to begin with.

Good luck as always.

[edit]

Grrr Niko  . If you wanted to remake his map, at least get the person's approval [unless you did and I'm just jumping to conclusions].