Stuck (DM)

[biggleZ]

Map Stuck (Deathmatch) by biggles
Waypoints added

screenshot:


download link:
http://rapidshare.com/files/39869642/Stuck.zip.html

Please comment what you think about it

[Keron Cyst]

Very poor. Compare your work with the default maps. I don't mean to be harsh but I seriously cannot find anything good or unique about this map.

• It repetitively uses only one scenery over and over again
• There is insanely minimalistic shading, only on the outer edges
• The layout is not circular; there are a lot of dead-ends which forces all players to cluster in one area of the map (here, the bottom-left)
• The polygons' textures are not stretched at all (makes them boring to look at)
• The polygons are jagged and too simple (if I can tell how many polygons you used to make a particular section, it might need more )

Study other maps. Layout is really important as well.

[The Specialist]

Take Keron's advice and I agree with him.  This layout is too simple and will have a lot of spraying and spawnkilling.   Don't use one polygon for platforms, use a number of them to creat a better one that you can shade and improve on.  A thumbs down on this one.

[biggleZ]

thanks for advice well i just posted it if someone els them me like "playing" it
i dont like that Picture either but when i play it fells better for me

[wedding]

oMg, you have to learn very much...Like they said above!

[biggleZ]

Take Keron's advice and I agree with him. This layout is too simple and will have a lot of spraying and spawnkilling. Don't use one polygon for platforms, use a number of them to creat a better one that you can shade and improve on. A thumbs down on this one.

okay

[~Niko~]

You need to spent mooooore time on it... make a better layout, more polygons... (My maps have 1500-4000 polygons ) But your map sucks... really you can't do it better? I believe yes.