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Offline Vltava

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Re: Poetry!!!!!!
« Reply #20 on: July 06, 2006, 05:10:48 pm »
Quite awful indeed
Is the absurdity at
The top of the page

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Re: Poetry!!!!!!
« Reply #21 on: July 06, 2006, 05:12:19 pm »
When Hitman said it was awful I actually read it.......If your going too write a poem, use proper grammar.

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Re: Poetry!!!!!!
« Reply #22 on: July 06, 2006, 06:58:57 pm »
When Hitman said it was awful I actually read it.......If your going too write a poem, use proper grammar.

Oopsies ; )

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Re: Poetry!!!!!!
« Reply #23 on: July 06, 2006, 07:27:40 pm »
Hey man girls love the stuff u no how many times,.......i am stoping there LMAO. not for ur flaming ears LMAO. Shows ur immuture aboout ur thoughts on life and actions are weak thats why u say poetry is lame or u just suck at it

I think girls like literacy first.

In response to the "we all do what we can to forget about life" poem, wouldn't escaping "life" be make up your life and therefore you enjoy it. It would have been better said that some/all do not like the social responsibilities and standards.


Here are some poems I like, not that I wrote.

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Rose, I hear your voice near to me
I've put away the poisoned chalice, for now
And lie down amongst the flowerbeds

Whichever stars we walk among
We both seek out the darkest red
The wine was turned to blood again
Without this blood we'd both be dead

I've wound myself tight into the hedgerows
Let's see which way the winter wind blows

(You are my shadow)

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A white rainbow (a roaring aura)
Under an unquiet skull
(A tremulous column of air, hanging there)
Moon's milk spills from my unquiet skull and forms a white rainbow
(A psychosis, a roaring aura)
Aurora borealis
A white rainbow
A lunar ascension, a solar declension
A tremulous column of air hanging there
A bleached beach, a psychosis
(Laughing like skeletons clattering at midday)
Feel the moon's pull
Feel the moon's pull
Moon's milk spills from my unquiet skull
A white rainbow, inverted vertigo
A psychosis
(Moon's milk spills)
And overhead, overhead
(Feel the moon's pull)
A tremulous column of air, hanging there
(A white rainbow)
Laughing like skeletons clattering at midday
And overhead, a white rainbow
Under an unquiet skull, under an unquiet skull
Feel the moon's pull
A white rainbow
« Last Edit: July 06, 2006, 07:31:32 pm by Smegma »

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Re: Poetry!!!!!!
« Reply #24 on: July 06, 2006, 07:41:25 pm »
allow me to take an excerpt from Cyanide and Happiness (www.explosm.net)...

There once was a man from Nantucket,
Who didn't know what a Limerick was.

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Re: Poetry!!!!!!
« Reply #25 on: July 06, 2006, 07:41:44 pm »
You can like poetry and not be emo, I don't know why if you write some type of poetry people go "OMFG YOU EMO STFU"...
I don't write poetry but I used to like reading it, if you people have the urge to write poetry then by all means go for it, I'm encouraging you!
Illumination is not reached by visualizing the light but by exploring the darkness.

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Re: Poetry!!!!!!
« Reply #26 on: July 06, 2006, 08:10:15 pm »
It sounded less like poetry, and more like someone having a rant about gaming.

Anyway...

I once played a newbie called Roland,
Who couldn't do fawk all on Voland.
So I pulled out my knife,
And ended his strife.
He was lagging, since he was in Poland.

gah that sucked.. ah well. I tried 8)
« Last Edit: July 06, 2006, 08:11:47 pm by -Vis- »


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Re: Poetry!!!!!!
« Reply #27 on: July 06, 2006, 08:33:27 pm »
It sounded less like poetry, and more like someone having a rant about gaming.

Anyway...

I once played a newbie called Roland,
Who couldn't do fawk all on Voland.
So I pulled out my knife,
And ended his strife.
He was lagging, since he was in Poland.

gah that sucked.. ah well. I tried 8)
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Re: Poetry!!!!!!
« Reply #28 on: July 06, 2006, 09:32:11 pm »
Ahem...

Make room for my masterpiece.








Fire

By Rambo_6








Fire Fire Fire

Fire Fire Fire

Fire Fire Fire

Fire on my brain.
































It's a masterpiece.

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Re: Poetry!!!!!!
« Reply #29 on: July 06, 2006, 11:04:34 pm »
I liked yours Vis. I would put something but I'm terrible a poetry.
18:15

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Re: Poetry!!!!!!
« Reply #30 on: July 07, 2006, 02:05:11 am »
I will make a haiku inspired by Rambo_6's poem.

Fire fire fire fire fire
Fire fire fire fire fire fire fire
Fire is on my brain.

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Re: Poetry!!!!!!
« Reply #31 on: July 07, 2006, 07:26:14 am »
I want this shirt :(


Offline Milkman Dan

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Re: Poetry!!!!!!
« Reply #32 on: July 07, 2006, 07:40:02 am »
Heres a Haiku inspired by Chakra.

(I think it's 5, 7, 5)

A dick called chakra
sits in his small british room
sucking cock all day

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Re: Poetry!!!!!!
« Reply #33 on: July 07, 2006, 07:48:55 am »
I once knew a noob

He kept talking about boobs.

I called him a foob

He called me a joob.

:S

I'm away.

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Re: Poetry!!!!!!
« Reply #34 on: July 07, 2006, 09:12:43 am »
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How happy is the blameless vestal's lot!
The world forgetting, by the world forgot.
Eternal sunshine of the spotless mind!
Each pray'r accepted, and each wish resign'd;
"Eloisa to Abelard" by Alexander Pope

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Re: Poetry!!!!!!
« Reply #35 on: July 07, 2006, 09:19:21 am »
I once knew a noob

He kept talking about boobs.

I called him a foob

He called me a joob.

:S



Hahaha. I love you kingkitty!

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Re: Poetry!!!!!!
« Reply #36 on: July 07, 2006, 09:20:14 am »
Heres a Haiku inspired by Chakra.

(I think it's 5, 7, 5)

A **** called chakra
sits in his small british room
sucking cock all day

*sips brandy and listens approvingly*

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Re: Poetry!!!!!!
« Reply #37 on: July 07, 2006, 11:18:08 am »
Haikus are NOT in.

However, freeform is.


Salad

By Rambo_6


             ...Hark

Hark

   Hark

Hark

Salad is knocking at my            door

Hark

Ark

   Rk

K

BO OOM CHKCKHHKKHCKHK CK HKCH KCHK HC

S A L A D

SALAD PRIME

DING ZING FING DLING

        saSasaSasasaSasasa




Dang, that took me like 4 hours to do. Poetry is hard work.
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Re: Poetry!!!!!!
« Reply #38 on: July 07, 2006, 11:57:17 am »
It's a good thing none of you are stuck on the streets making money off of these poems.

'cause you'd die. :D
With all its sham, drudgery, and broken dreams it is
still a beautiful world.  Strive to be happy.

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Re: Poetry!!!!!!
« Reply #39 on: July 07, 2006, 12:11:05 pm »
Rambo_6 you suck at freeform. This is what it's all about.

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