Author Topic: My first weapon, Makov .89 (redone) (Read 2302 times)

|FA| Arbi†er · « **on:** July 26, 2007, 08:18:03 am »

(whoops, its not my first weapon. its my first RELEASED weapon.)
(redone)

Finally believed it was worthy of (re)uploading. Constructive criticism please.
Newer version pics :

(lol i know my aim's **** ass off.)
I just randomly named it.. cobbed Magnum and Kalashinkov, lol.
I made all except the sound.

brad · « **Reply #1 on:** July 26, 2007, 08:51:59 am »

To be honest, it's really bland. It needs better shading.

Here's Espadon's shading tutorial, it really came in handy when I started my mod:

Bunney · « **Reply #2 on:** July 26, 2007, 08:54:12 am »

Try to use 2 pixel slopes,

it will look much better.

also try to shade it more and to color it a bit more, unsless u like gray weapons

|FA| Arbi†er · « **Reply #3 on:** July 26, 2007, 08:55:30 am »

uh, yeah. that was my aim. all grey-ey.

Espadon · « **Reply #4 on:** July 26, 2007, 10:24:18 am »

Ah, but there is a science to all-grey too. You need to have more subtle shading. And you need to transition from black to your internal grey color on your stock so that it doesn't look jagged.

Henito Kisou · « **Reply #5 on:** July 26, 2007, 01:06:16 pm »

Nice remake of my Lazarus interface.
There's too low contrast of shading colors, try make darker.
I have nothing to black parts inside weapons, but try replace them with darker color, not exactly black. Outline is ok, but shading is too bright to notice.
I dont like self-advertising, but you can see simple step-by-step shading there:

Result:

Mangled* · « **Reply #6 on:** July 26, 2007, 05:27:24 pm »

For a first mod it's excellent work. The shading isn't bad at all and it's nice and big and quite detailed.

I agree it could do more in the way of shadng (or more accurately tone) I think the grey part of it could be toned down in places to give it a more 3D look with a few more shadows.

Nice work regardless.

|FA| Arbi†er · « **Reply #7 on:** July 27, 2007, 02:05:38 am »

Quote from: Henito Kisou on July 26, 2007, 01:06:16 pm

Nice remake of my Lazarus interface.

Thanks, it was the first time i'd touch the interface-gfx's interface gfx (lol. Bacisally, first interface mod.)
As you can see.. i kinda remade the gun, in 5 minutes or so.

--- I'll be changing my name to a simple Arbiter (as a new account)---

Arbiter · « **Reply #8 on:** July 27, 2007, 02:17:47 am »

Changed. I've left |FA| anyway. I'll just make changes via the old account.

Mangled* · « **Reply #9 on:** July 27, 2007, 06:26:48 am »

The gun looks alot better now

Espadon · « **Reply #10 on:** July 27, 2007, 06:39:06 am »

Neat Halo bots there, Arb.

Arbiter · « **Reply #11 on:** July 27, 2007, 07:02:10 am »

uh, they're yours.

Bunney · « **Reply #12 on:** July 27, 2007, 09:34:34 am »

So they are nice indeed

And a nice Re-Do

keep on makin gunz! and interfaces!

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