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« on: August 03, 2007, 11:09:15 am »
Check it out ;D. It's almost release time, just need to give it a few more finishing touches. Tell me if u think of anything that might improve it. thanks everyone.
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Re: ctf_2Kingdoms
« Reply #1 on: August 03, 2007, 11:10:10 am »
Screen? Download link?
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« Reply #2 on: August 03, 2007, 11:11:28 am »
Quote from: PaFel on August 03, 2007, 11:10:10 am
Screen? Download link?

wat do you want a download link for man. This is a work in progress dude. You can't play it yet.
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Re: ctf_2Kingdoms
« Reply #3 on: August 03, 2007, 11:15:27 am »
Quote from: MyiEye on August 03, 2007, 11:11:28 am
wat do you want a download link for man. This is a work in progress dude. You can't play it yet.

Ok sorry I didn't chcecked the section ;D

And on topic: Shapes are good, idea too but shading "is invisible" :) You must shade it and maybe retexture because it looks s**ty.
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Re: ctf_2Kingdoms
« Reply #4 on: August 03, 2007, 12:04:44 pm »
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Re: ctf_2Kingdoms
« Reply #5 on: August 03, 2007, 05:55:07 pm »
Hey Keron Cyst thanks a heck of a lot m8. That link taught me a lot and I use it to redo a lot of my map. Which I'll post a pic of in a few minutes. Thanks again guys.
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Re: ctf_2Kingdoms
« Reply #6 on: August 04, 2007, 04:27:34 am »
Better now but still much to do to do it nice-lookin'.
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Re: ctf_2Kingdoms
« Reply #7 on: August 12, 2007, 08:43:48 pm »
Yeah like the roof for example and a heck of a lot of other stuff, but I'll have to get there later, too busy now. Do you like the colours?

Date Posted: August 11, 2007, 12:39:19 AM
K I've updated it so pls comment ;D
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« Reply #8 on: August 13, 2007, 04:13:44 am »
Well...I must say there is a hell a lot of improvement from the first screenshot to the latest update although it still isn't quite releasable quality yet as you well know...

What are the random squares doing on the right side in the air. They don't serve much of a purpose and look rather odd (well, just change their shapes to something better and make them non-floating). The middle path between the big houses looks too blocky and not so neat. What are the wheel-like things stuck together floating on the left side? They need some use otherwise they don't serve much of a purpose. The house roof colors look too bold. You ought to make the blue and red a bit more subtle. Maybe you could add a third path going above the map like the caves below, just in the upper roof. The background color looks way too bright and bold. Either choose a more melow color, or just tone the current color way down and experiment with something more subtle for the background. Don't keep the current color.

Now for the nice improvements you've made. The lower caves were a nice addition and they were fixed up pretty nice compared to the beginning screenshots. The texture and polygon coloring has improved a good deal...it's altogether improving, just needs some more tuning.

Good luck, have fun...etc.
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« Reply #9 on: August 13, 2007, 01:15:20 pm »
Thanks man. I really like your advise. As for the background colour, I'm definately with you there and I've changed that already. Those 2 random blocks were just blocks that I was working with, sorry I should have said so, but forgot. I'll try that uper tunnel when I've got time and I'll make the roof colours a bit more dull. I was also thinking of sticking some birhgt coloured polys in the wall, suck as bright pink, bright blue and suthe wheech, to look like jewels. I've atached chains to the wheels so that they are hanging from the roof. I'm not sure quite wat o do with the ground between the two buildings, but I'll try some stuff.

Date Posted: August 13, 2007, 11:15:43 AM
I didn't change the roofs at all, but I think they look better than before with the new background. I'll still get to that other tunnel.
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« Reply #10 on: August 13, 2007, 08:25:32 pm »
Yes, much better ;D. Hmm, it's your choice whether or not to add the third path...I don't even know when your not it would be good.
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« Reply #11 on: August 14, 2007, 09:43:21 am »
Well then I'll probably leave the third path out of things. Oh and I don't wanna be rude, but it's "whether or not", not "when your not". :(
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Re: ctf_2Kingdoms
« Reply #12 on: August 14, 2007, 11:09:36 am »
wow pretty nice..i used to do maps....but its been years i would make a topic on my old ones..i made training maps..but very nice [:
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Re: ctf_2Kingdoms
« Reply #13 on: August 14, 2007, 09:43:40 pm »
eh still needs work
looks like it has potential
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Re: ctf_2Kingdoms
« Reply #14 on: August 20, 2007, 03:07:53 pm »
I have a udatated a it aaaayeee
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Re: ctf_2Kingdoms
« Reply #15 on: August 21, 2007, 12:21:51 am »
Quote from: MyiEye on August 14, 2007, 09:43:21 am
Well then I'll probably leave the third path out of things. Oh and I don't wanna be rude, but it's "whether or not", not "when your not". :(

Grammar Natzi.

Umm, new update doesn't change much :-\. Well, looks fine.
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Re: ctf_2Kingdoms
« Reply #16 on: August 21, 2007, 01:50:02 pm »
Looks pretty cool but next time put a download link into it first
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Re: ctf_2Kingdoms
« Reply #17 on: August 22, 2007, 11:07:56 pm »
alright it's updated again with some very hot tunnel colors if i do say so myself, but I'm still having trouble deciding on how to do the buildings' interior, pls help me out there. Thanks :D
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Re: ctf_2Kingdoms ~<UPDATE>~
« Reply #18 on: August 24, 2007, 02:04:11 pm »
man how do you guys think up such sexy map layouts..

*goes to drawingboard for next map*
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Re: ctf_2Kingdoms ~<UPDATE>~
« Reply #19 on: August 24, 2007, 02:25:31 pm »
These lights sucks, get others.

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