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Offline gedazz

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(Ctf) Ledas
« on: October 06, 2007, 07:18:02 am »
Ledas
Capture the Flag

Here's my first decent Soldat map. The name "Ledas" is Lithuanian and it means "ice" (I'm bad at giving names).

Overview: http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/2125/ctfledasda3.png
There are two routes, unless you want to go over the mountain. Medikits and grenade kits can be found at both bases and scattered all over the map. Flags are separated from spawnpoints. Don't know why I did this :-X
I had some fun making the scenery, especially the trucks ;D By the way, you can even "sit" in the driver seats of two machines.
The map is not waypointed!

I hope you like it ;D

(The map file is attached to the topic.)
« Last Edit: October 06, 2007, 07:23:17 am by gedazz »
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Offline Sytrus

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Re: (Ctf) Ledas
« Reply #1 on: October 06, 2007, 07:50:20 am »
Looks pretty cool, but I don't like those sprites you have there.
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Offline Master Chief43

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Re: (Ctf) Ledas
« Reply #2 on: October 06, 2007, 11:11:14 am »
Pretty good for the first 'decent'. Yea... I don't like the truck scenery... The bottom cave seems to look funny... like... it's just... annoying. Good work and I hope to see more of your work. IMPROVE!
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Re: (Ctf) Ledas
« Reply #3 on: October 06, 2007, 11:44:14 am »
Thanks for comments. And, yeah, no more silly scenery in the future :)
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Re: (Ctf) Ledas
« Reply #4 on: October 06, 2007, 11:47:22 am »
The construction vehicles are out-of-place (and transparent, wtf?).  The routes get too narrow at some points (I assume you wanted to get rid of spray, but this is a horrible way to do so).  The line of colliders on each side is totally unexpected.

This map is all show, no go.  Less concentration on the visuals, more on the gameplay.  Please.
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Re: (Ctf) Ledas
« Reply #5 on: October 06, 2007, 12:22:59 pm »
Quote from: Eagles_Arrows on October 06, 2007, 11:47:22 am
This map is all show, no go.  Less concentration on the visuals, more on the gameplay.  Please.
Thanks, I'll keep that in mind.
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Offline Laser Guy

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Re: (Ctf) Ledas
« Reply #6 on: October 06, 2007, 04:25:34 pm »
wooooo, SEXY
I rly like the heavy equpment scenery :D
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Re: (Ctf) Ledas
« Reply #7 on: October 07, 2007, 09:44:59 pm »
The top of the higher cave is rather too dark, since there are lights dangling from the ceilings that should be illuminating the roof. Also, in the little pictures in your overview, the construction vehicles don't look so out of place as the brown background and ground suit the desired look. The heavy machinery in the icy look is out of place. Nice idea, and scenery, but executed rather in an odd sort of manner.

Tune it up a bit.
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Offline ANdro!d

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Re: (Ctf) Ledas
« Reply #8 on: October 26, 2007, 12:58:44 pm »
It's a cool map ! Me like it better than all the other ones that have always the same symmetric structure and are very small.
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