nox-titanic v0.1

[Noxturnus]

hi, i made my first map and i hope you enjoy it...
its just version 0.1
http://pagueon.de/titanic%20v0.1.zip


plz say something about the map... i want to make the map better


//only dm now


OVERVIEW:

SCREENSHOTS:

[viggoloniggolo]

please post an overview or screenshot and read the Rules

[Noxturnus]

can someone move it into thwe discuss forum?

[viggoloniggolo]

lets wait for a moderator/admin to show up first, i think he will move it for you/or lock it up.
ok the overview has arrived at last

It looks ok, the overview is too small to judge because aren't going to download anyway.
maybe make the ship bottom darker, and those pipes sides darker, add some ship scenery, an anchor or something, fishies in the water, bubbles in the water, a better sun in the sky, some normal clouds in the sky.

[Eagles_Arrows]

can someone move it into thwe discuss forum?

No because this is a map topic.

The ship looks like it could use some shading.  The clouds and smoke are yucky but it's a good try.

Looks more like Poly Art

[Noxturnus]

its just version 0.1^^

[Noxturnus]

lets wait for a moderator/admin to show up first, i think he will move it for you/or lock it up.
ok the overview has arrived at last

It looks ok, the overview is too small to judge because aren't going to download anyway.
maybe make the ship bottom darker, and those pipes sides darker, add some ship scenery, an anchor or something, fishies in the water, bubbles in the water, a sun in the sky, some normal clouds in the sky.

there is a sun in sky look screenshot1

[Eagles_Arrows]

I see you also have some unconnected polys here and there (look at that line going through the ship in the screenie).  Better fix those up in your next version.

[viggoloniggolo]

oh and dont doublepost, connect the polys and change your nickname, nox^ is a friend of mine who has been in soldat for almost as long as me and you dont want to pcc him off...

I've got some old maps made by him/with him which I can post aswell and prove you.

[Noxturnus]

i have the name noxturnus, nox is the shortform and i have the nickname since 3 years

todo -> 0.2
fix connections
new scenerys for the ship
some changing colors

[viggoloniggolo]

and he has the nickname for 5 years.

[Bgretydews]

Wow vig, stop being a dumbass hes not gonna chnage his name just because your friend has a name similer.

The map needs shading and just looks too plain, i kinda like that clouds though

[FliesLikeABrick]

the nicknames are different enough that I don't think it'll be a problem.

vigg, does this mean you would argue with anyone whose nickname started with "nox" ?

[ThomasMortfog]

^ No, he'll just argue with anyone who makes him mad and will strive to always get his way.   

The ship is ok for a first layout, you've got the idea. What you should add, a large iceberg (ice poly) smashed into the ship and a large crack going through it. If you're good enough you could even the open crack have some floors you could walk on.

[viggoloniggolo]

yeah, I wanna argue with noxes!

they should pick a better name, frost for instance.

[Demonic]

Take it to PM then, keep this topic clean from off topic please.