Veoto 2 ! :P

[Ahmet]

Hello. I'm a new member in the SoldatForums from Turkey. This is my second Deathmatch map. That's name Veoto-2 but it isn't like it   . Here is the links of ScreenShots:

http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/1906/veoto21wn1.png

http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/8896/veoto22jz8.png

http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/81/veoto23pu3.png

http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/3549/veoto24hq4.png

http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/3844/veoto25uq5.png

                                                   .-DownLoad-.

[Kagesha]

I'm going to just put it out there.
1st. Too basic all it is, is a shaped box with a few polys in the middle.
2nd. Scenery  is lame i mean what the hell is that thing sticking out of the bottom poly...an icicle? a few boxes...boring

2/5 You seem new to map making but hey? learn from what people say good luck in the future

[Ahmet]

yeah... not very well but wait for my new maps and sorry for bad english

[~Niko~]

Too simple layout... randomly placed sceneries maybe? Well, this isn't bad, but need some improvements. Try to do a better layout (More polys) and select the sceneries that you want before place them (Don't put them randomly).
You can do your own sceneries if it is necessary...

Those clouds will make lag and make a poor gameplay, so a suggestion is that remove them and replace them for fog.bmp and put it in the ground. Iy you want clouts use the cloud2.bmp (The default one)

[Shadow G-Unit]

I'm going to just put it out there.
1st. Too basic all it is, is a shaped box with a few polys in the middle.
2nd. Scenery  is lame i mean what the hell is that thing sticking out of the bottom poly...an icicle? a few boxes...boring

2/5 You seem new to map making but hey? learn from what people say good luck in the future

That basically sums it up.

[El_Spec]

It looks nothing like the original Veoto.  Remakes should have a quite similar layout, but with a different them or texture.  This is only your second map, you still need some practice will maps and you'll get better and gain a better understanding of how maps are made and how you can make fantastic ones.  My suggestions are what Kagesha pointed out.

[Ahmet]

hmm... thanks for all

[~Niko~]

Try to improve it 

[Keron Cyst]

It seems like you rely too much on scenery to make the map look good. Try to think of a better polygon layout, perhaps.