FUTURISTIC MOD [in development]

[Lord Frunkamunch]

I've gotta agree with dairy on this one; you use way too much black. One tip, only use black for the outline. If you want to make it obvious where 2 parts of the gun meet, just use a darker than normal line, NOT black.

Great job on the outlines, though. With some work those could be incredible.

[dillon_patchell]

What do you guys think of this?

[Henito Kisou]

Much better I think, but still in some places so much flat. Also try make smoother outline, because that already you did is still little too sharp.

[Lord Frunkamunch]

Much better. Some parts of the gun could use a bit more shading, but overall it looks great.

[-Skykanden-]

Really nice one!
Now continue with that style, hey, but do other weapons

[Dairy]

Weapon is way too "fat". The black lines in the weapon makes it ugly. Unless you use darker colors. The proportions are unform and doesnt tell much about what it represents. Shading is simple and similar to just metalic material. The only details are the black lines ... well, in the end - still nothing impresive and have to practice or just focus more on working than just posting it.

[dillon_patchell]

there are no fecking black lines in the weapon...should i go even lighter gray???


Date Posted: January 24, 2008, 12:43:30 pm

Date Posted: January 25, 2008, 12:51:35 pmOkay this'll be the last revision of this particular gun, so enjoy 

[Henito Kisou]

Ok, now that one is finally good and can stay if you dont want improve, so may stay as final

[Sgt.Colwell]

ok if you really want to be a critic go make your own damn mod... and if you asked a stupid question like your did. id pick up any Flippin weapon and killa any damn alien with it, it can be a spoon or your dogs collar, to a M-16A4