Author Topic: Some guns. (Read 4111 times)

porta · « **on:** March 22, 2008, 12:41:32 pm »

These are my guns
M48,
and m70 b2,
Firefly 9mm,
Blacbird pistol,
Shotgun,
Liberator 1942,
Silent 32. gun,
hi point 995,
pistol,
pistol short,
silenced pistol,
Ruger mk1,
Meat cleaver,
Knife,
hi point sniper edition.

-Skykanden- · « **Reply #1 on:** March 22, 2008, 06:11:16 pm »

fix the bolt of the M48, and make it longer. Also repair the back part of the stock

about the M70: i like the stock but needs to fix the magazine and the body (in general)

Mangled* · « **Reply #2 on:** March 22, 2008, 06:14:19 pm »

Please:

1) Stop making brand new topics every time you've made a new weapon image. Keep them in one thread.

2) Please post threads in the correct section. This is a partial modification so put it in the partial modification section and not the general discussion section.

3) A... *spontaneously combusts violently into a huge fireball*

frosty · « **Reply #3 on:** March 27, 2008, 02:05:44 am »

lmao, i have a topic which may need moving

http://forums.soldat.pl/index.php?topic=25754.0

The Bone Collector · « **Reply #4 on:** March 27, 2008, 02:40:56 am »

m70 reminds me of the AK-47. It looks ok, but some shading is needed, and fix the size/shape of the gun to make it less sharper.

porta · « **Reply #5 on:** April 09, 2008, 01:39:59 pm »

I aded 9 mm firefly pistol

Stasi · « **Reply #6 on:** April 09, 2008, 02:06:37 pm »

I liked it.I wish you luck on your progress,my friend.

porta · « **Reply #7 on:** April 09, 2008, 02:08:42 pm »

Thanks.

Boots · « **Reply #8 on:** April 09, 2008, 04:28:31 pm »

Quote from: porta on April 09, 2008, 01:39:59 pm

I aded 9 mm firefly pistol

Maybe instead of makin' more and more weapons, fix up the ones that we have gave crit' on.

All the weapons don't have very good texture for the big size they are, shaddin' isnt bad.... Maybe just a little to plain though.

porta · « **Reply #9 on:** April 10, 2008, 02:42:56 pm »

Aded black bird pistol and fixed m48.

Hair|Trigger · « **Reply #10 on:** April 10, 2008, 07:44:16 pm »

I love the firefly 9mm.

Fix the m70 please!! add darker shading to it

porta · « **Reply #11 on:** April 11, 2008, 01:49:30 pm »

Fixed m70.I cant make a magazine as hard i am tryang.
Added shotgun.

Date Posted: April 11, 2008, 02:03:18 pm

Aded liberator 1942.

-Skykanden- · « **Reply #12 on:** April 11, 2008, 01:58:01 pm »

Aw... i don't like those new weapons that you made!
What, a pistol bigger than a rifle? No sir, fix that

Make the magazine of the UHC more visible

I think that you can do it so much better, look more pics and take your time

Hair|Trigger · « **Reply #13 on:** April 11, 2008, 06:26:23 pm »

Dude, you should try making the lines inside the m70 more visible I think. See where you have the dark lines on the top end of the gun, make them darker plz, then put a very slight shaddow under them, I think that'd work

I don't like the shape of the new shotgun, Just fill in all those missing gaps and things then shade it a bit more.

porta · « **Reply #14 on:** April 27, 2008, 01:24:42 am »

Update.

Hair|Trigger · « **Reply #15 on:** April 27, 2008, 01:48:14 am »

Silent pistol doesn't have a trigger, and is incredibly thin. Try atleast making it into a gun with a silencer

The other gun is fine, just needs a little more detail, the shading is good

porta · « **Reply #16 on:** April 30, 2008, 02:37:33 pm »

The silenced 38 i made on some remember.

Date Posted: April 30, 2008, 03:33:22 pm

Update:
Pistol
Pistol short
Silenced pistol
Ruger mk1

Boots · « **Reply #17 on:** April 30, 2008, 04:13:26 pm »

Tbh, noc. Your weapons are shit and need improving. Fix them, before trying to make a whole bunch and wasting your own time.

Dairy · « **Reply #18 on:** April 30, 2008, 04:45:34 pm »

Quote from: Boots on April 30, 2008, 04:13:26 pm

Tbh, noc. Your weapons are bollocks and need improving. Fix them, before trying to make a whole bunch and wasting your own time.

If you ment weapons from the porta I can tell you just one thing : What the fuck ?
Seriously, your critism has nothing to do with constructivity. Who the hell are you even ?

Porta: Your weapons ain't that bad. But please, don't rush them and don't make them too big. That's all.

Mastadi · « **Reply #19 on:** April 30, 2008, 06:28:09 pm »

You really need to work a lot on shapes.

Boots · « **Reply #20 on:** May 01, 2008, 02:05:07 am »

Quote from: Dairy on April 30, 2008, 04:45:34 pm

Quote from: Boots on April 30, 2008, 04:13:26 pm
Tbh, noc. Your weapons are bollocks and need improving. Fix them, before trying to make a whole bunch and wasting your own time.

If you ment weapons from the porta I can tell you just one thing : What the feck ?
Seriously, your critism has nothing to do with constructivity. Who the hell are you even ?

Porta: Your weapons ain't that bad. But please, don't rush them and don't make them too big. That's all.

Why should you even care what I think? You don't even know who I am, so please just leave it be Mr. Im to good to notice other modders.

Espadon · « **Reply #21 on:** May 01, 2008, 08:00:42 am »

Who the hell are you to be bigshotting, Bootz? Is he really too good to notice others or have you just not made something big enough to be noticed?
If you say something is crap without giving the guy some pointers then how is he going to pull himself out of the morass?

Don't be such a stubborn Australian.

Boots · « **Reply #22 on:** May 01, 2008, 04:13:10 pm »

Ok. One thing which stands out the most to me is the shaping, and details. Like the shotgun, the shape of that is maybe abit to square, and its colours are kinda plain. My fav' would have to be the second one, which im guessin' is a ruger? It looks nice, shape is good but it hasn't got enough detail IMO. Silenced pistol looks abit to big, with it being almost as bit as the rifles.

Sorry to all my bs over the last few days, I'll be sure to clean my act up D:.

Dairy · « **Reply #23 on:** May 01, 2008, 04:38:55 pm »

Sorry If I hurted you, didn't ment to. But lately there are some sort of people which I don't see usually and they are giving just too sharp critism. I mean, they personally wouldn't be to happy with more flame than constructive critism in other posts.

Ya' know what I mean ?

On the other hand I know who you are. I know all (I guess) modders around here. It's nice to have some new blood in this quite empty topics. I respect all who're making something for this community.

Espadon · « **Reply #24 on:** May 01, 2008, 04:40:14 pm »

Quote from: Boots on May 01, 2008, 04:13:10 pm

Ok. One thing which stands out the most to me is the shaping, and details. Like the shotgun, the shape of that is maybe abit to square, and its colours are kinda plain. My fav' would have to be the second one, which im guessin' is a ruger? It looks nice, shape is good but it hasn't got enough detail IMO. Silenced pistol looks abit to big, with it being almost as bit as the rifles.

He's right. You just need to take a little bit more time with mixing or sampling the colors so that your guns aren't just blocks of 3 colors. I also highly suggest you make barrels at least 2 pix wide, never 1 pix wide [like in your Colt and HP995].

Hair|Trigger · « **Reply #25 on:** May 02, 2008, 12:50:48 am »

Please clean up your weapon shapes so they are more clear. Some of your pistols look as if you simply got a pencil in paint and drew the outline by hand with the mouse. Take the time to do pixel by pixel, if it looks a little odd, erase the secton you want to fix and try a different approach again and again until you get one that looks good, and/or suits the weapon. At least thats how I do it. Good luck!

porta · « **Reply #26 on:** December 26, 2008, 06:54:19 pm »

I am back and i modified ak gun, silent pistol and a hi point.

porta · « **Reply #27 on:** December 27, 2008, 08:54:34 am »

Update, fixed m48, added 2 knifes and i will post a pistol.

Mangled* · « **Reply #28 on:** December 27, 2008, 02:02:11 pm »

The quality of your work is improving. Keep at it.

Hair|Trigger · « **Reply #29 on:** December 27, 2008, 07:44:50 pm »

welcome back porta!

I'm liking your work, just keep going at it (and work on those shapes too

)

porta · « **Reply #30 on:** December 27, 2008, 07:53:04 pm »

Thanks, i made a m4 series from a hair trigers outlines and i will post it at shade the outlines as soon i get my computer back. (repairing cd rom)

porta · « **Reply #31 on:** December 27, 2008, 08:00:18 pm »

I made hipoint snipers edition.

Hair|Trigger · « **Reply #32 on:** December 29, 2008, 06:21:32 pm »

okay, the Hipoint-995 needs a short of skinnier stock on the end, yours is very vertical, and the scope needs to be shorter

also, are you re-sizing? If so, then you should make your own outlines first, then if you want put the re-sized weapons as the shading, it looks a lot nicer (re-sized outlines generally look bad)

Mastadi · « **Reply #33 on:** January 15, 2009, 05:52:14 pm »

As I said before, you need to work a bit on your shapes. The shading is really good, but the effect is quite meh when combined with not so good shapes. Also, many of your weapons are far too thin IMHO, e.g. 32 silent pistol.

Overall, they're quite good. Some practice and who knows, you might be one of the best modders out there

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Author Topic: Some guns. (Read 4111 times)