Author Topic: Kerrazyeye's Armament Emporium  (Read 1097 times)

0 Members and 1 Guest are viewing this topic.

Offline Kerrazyeye

  • Soldier
  • **
  • Posts: 120
Kerrazyeye's Armament Emporium
« on: April 20, 2008, 06:00:33 pm »
Since these are all the rage these days, I'm making a wip thread. Constructive criticism, help, etc, please. There will be more to come. And without further ado....

◄KERRAZYEYES ARMAMENT EMPORIUM►
- L96

- MG36

- SCAR-L

- SCAR-H

- MP7A1

- MP7A1

- 90two

- M4/M1014

- M72E10

- MR-C

- Knife

- M8 Compact

- G36C
« Last Edit: April 20, 2008, 06:52:46 pm by Kerrazyeye »

Offline xtishereb

  • Flagrunner
  • ****
  • Posts: 908
  • I swear, my chainsaw killed you on its own.
Re: Kerrazyeye's Armament Emporium
« Reply #1 on: April 20, 2008, 10:29:44 pm »
This is pretty good. You've got a good feel for the shape of the weapons, which is what I tend to be the most anal about. Speaking of which, the grips on the assault rifles tend to be a little bulbous in the back (SCARs, G36C). You can try re-working where they attach to the receiver, or maybe just make them a little thinner in the back.
Right now I'd recommend focusing more on shading darker areas. Right now it seems all you have is light and normal. Exaggerate the darker areas more, try making the normal areas slightly lighter.
Also, if you're going to be using fewer colors try dithering. You get kinda a checkerboard pattern. Vltava is pretty good at this, check out Trigger Happy or Killzone. (shameless plug: I dither too)

I'd love to see you keep working on this. With some more feedback and practice, you'll seriously kick ass.
<3*xwd
love conquers all

Offline -Skykanden-

  • Flamebow Warrior
  • *****
  • Posts: 3065
  • Hallowed be my name
Re: Kerrazyeye's Armament Emporium
« Reply #2 on: April 21, 2008, 06:54:03 am »
I really like the L96, scar, adn the knife, but the Compact xm8 compact looks a bit strange, too fat
I trust that you'll be really nice on modding, i like a lot your style

Ah could you repair some images, i don't see some

Offline PaFel

  • Veteran
  • *****
  • Posts: 1628
  • Weaponology Expert
    • PaFcio TACTIACAL
Re: Kerrazyeye's Armament Emporium
« Reply #3 on: April 21, 2008, 01:05:37 pm »
I like those weapons. Shapes are excelent, shading is also good but at some places too dark imo.

Overall - really good work. Keep makin' stuff like that and you could make really good mods.

Offline -Skykanden-

  • Flamebow Warrior
  • *****
  • Posts: 3065
  • Hallowed be my name
Re: Kerrazyeye's Armament Emporium
« Reply #4 on: April 21, 2008, 01:20:01 pm »
Oh, now that i see the whole weapons i must say:
As Pafel said, the shapes are excelent.
But the colouring in MG36 is a bit dark, and makes the weapon look strange :/

I really really love your G36c, is awesome!

Could you make a FN2000?

Offline Hair|Trigger

  • Veteran
  • *****
  • Posts: 1595
  • HT|
Re: Kerrazyeye's Armament Emporium
« Reply #5 on: April 29, 2008, 05:13:25 am »
Sorry for posting in an 8 day old topic..

But I like them, nice and clear. altough some are pretty plain, they are good.  Clear and simple.  How long have you done this for?

Player since late 2007

Offline Kerrazyeye

  • Soldier
  • **
  • Posts: 120
Re: Kerrazyeye's Armament Emporium
« Reply #6 on: April 29, 2008, 10:17:50 pm »
Sorry for posting in an 8 day old topic..

But I like them, nice and clear. altough some are pretty plain, they are good.  Clear and simple.  How long have you done this for?
Since january this year. No previous experience with anything like this...
Usually takes about 30 minutes per gun. Its hard to find the time to do them, seems like I always have something better to do (play soldat, bmx, go to gf's, watch downloaded seasons of stargate, 24, and lost)

The only guns I made that I dont like are the M8 compact and the MP7's.

EDIT: Decided to make a futuristic/modern mod set somewhere around 2025. I wont make the topic for it until I'm finished all the weapons and sounds and junk.
« Last Edit: May 06, 2008, 07:54:08 am by Kerrazyeye »