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Offline alfunit-01

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L96 Sniper Rifle
« on: August 16, 2008, 10:12:25 am »
Cool Sniper rifle i just did, bit scetchy graphics, comments please :P
Edit: just done a Arctic one aswell
Edit: okey i made them smaller
« Last Edit: August 17, 2008, 08:19:48 am by alfunit-01 »

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Re: L96 Sniper Rifle
« Reply #1 on: August 16, 2008, 12:24:03 pm »
Too big. Those dimensions will cause the weapon to go under the weapon names in the weapon menu and it will overlap over the weapon below. Try to stay within 64x17

It looks nice though, good work.
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Re: L96 Sniper Rifle
« Reply #2 on: August 16, 2008, 05:20:56 pm »
The scope doesnt look right to me

I think you should make the pointy bit on the top in the middle of the scope lower (it's currently 2px high, make it 1px)

either that or fill (raise) the dodgy bits either side of it

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Re: L96 Sniper Rifle
« Reply #3 on: August 16, 2008, 06:43:52 pm »
yeah sure like this?

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Re: L96 Sniper Rifle
« Reply #4 on: August 16, 2008, 07:02:46 pm »
they need a bit more shading, good job though ;)

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Re: L96 Sniper Rifle
« Reply #5 on: August 16, 2008, 10:08:51 pm »
Well I was talking about the smaller version, for the big one I guess you should do both to the scope.

You need to shade it more too ;)

But overall, it looks pretty lifelike :D


good job


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Re: L96 Sniper Rifle
« Reply #6 on: August 17, 2008, 07:54:48 am »
But overall, it looks pretty lifelike :D


good job

No no redo the entire stock/grip and the mag areas.
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Re: L96 Sniper Rifle
« Reply #7 on: August 17, 2008, 08:35:53 am »
yeah thanks guys :)
i did the middle of the scope that big because its kinda big in the picture but it looks better smaller i think, i improved the graphics of it though ;)
how so improve the stock and mag areas?

Date Posted: August 17, 2008, 09:12:47 am
okay how about this?

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Re: L96 Sniper Rifle
« Reply #8 on: August 17, 2008, 10:07:56 am »
Better. You're still exaggerating the vertical stuff too much though. Don't try to match the shape curve-for-curve, it doesn't work like that. Flatten the bottom of the mag a bit; it's not a Lee Enfield here.
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Re: L96 Sniper Rifle
« Reply #9 on: August 17, 2008, 10:33:54 am »
um okay
this mag better?
« Last Edit: August 17, 2008, 10:51:44 am by alfunit-01 »

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Re: L96 Sniper Rifle
« Reply #10 on: August 17, 2008, 12:23:50 pm »
Yerh. Stock is still a bit too exaggerated. Do note the butt of the stock is a bit higher than the lowest point of the grip.

Btw, your sig is too tall.
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Re: L96 Sniper Rifle
« Reply #11 on: August 17, 2008, 03:18:59 pm »
um okay its like my 3rd mod so its not going to be perfect >_>
some compliments would help though
but whatevever

Also why can't my sig be 24 pixels more than yours? Is 120 the limit on this forum?

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Re: L96 Sniper Rifle
« Reply #12 on: August 17, 2008, 03:20:36 pm »
Yeah, your sig is to big.

Guns look a little cluttered trying to fit all the details in.
But you're getting better.

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Re: L96 Sniper Rifle
« Reply #13 on: August 17, 2008, 05:47:24 pm »
Your good points are good enough that they don't need to be pointed out -- you should be more confident in yourself about them. Crits are just various ideas; you don't have to follow them at all, but I'm suggesting them since it seems to me you're looking to go that way ^^

Read forum signature rules regarding sig size since I can't be arsed to go remove your sig this minute.
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Re: L96 Sniper Rifle
« Reply #14 on: August 17, 2008, 06:54:13 pm »
ive changed my sig now, i didnt no it was over the limit.
Thanks for comments on the L69 Sniper it looks much better than before [pigtail]