Author Topic: Win/Fail? (Read 27648 times)

Espadon · « **on:** July 28, 2008, 07:10:33 pm »

Hrm... win/fail?

tehsnipah · « **Reply #1 on:** July 28, 2008, 07:15:16 pm »

Can't decide. When I first saw the half naked man, it was going to be fail, but when I read the writing, it was funny. So.... I guess I'm going for win, cuz I like the robot too.

The Geologist · « **Reply #2 on:** July 28, 2008, 07:23:39 pm »

Ha...definitely win. Maybe you're just messing around and experimenting with these past couple posted drawings, but you've got a good style going. I'm a bit envious, in fact.

Keep it up. If I could, I pay you to make a comic or something of the sort.

Espadon · « **Reply #3 on:** July 28, 2008, 07:44:41 pm »

Yeah, been doing some gags lately for a change, since I decided I should try to expand my scope... lol. The robots a test sketch for a friend on dA -- some really neat mechas if you're into the stuff here: VulnePro.

Date Posted: July 28, 2008, 08:34:22 pm

Oh yeah... and I've resumed work on her again. Slight rhinoplasty [snubbed a bit] since last time, but I'm wondering if you guys see anything that might need changing [on the face...face! Hair's not even half done and you can see I wacked up the ears with the clonestamp].

[will replace later]

EDIT: And please no "Why so serious??" lol

a-4-year-old · « **Reply #4 on:** July 28, 2008, 07:51:29 pm »

point her nose down a touch.

jrgp · « **Reply #5 on:** July 28, 2008, 08:22:40 pm »

She's hot. Can't you replace that weird master chief suit thing with a bikini?

Espadon · « **Reply #6 on:** July 28, 2008, 09:12:16 pm »

Sure I can but she's not THAT hot [and matching skin texture to the face is gonna be a bitch]. I mean I don't think you're into kinda-skinny girls, jgrp.

Dascoo · « **Reply #7 on:** July 28, 2008, 10:06:24 pm »

Espadon, I enjoy your work very much

a-4-year-old · « **Reply #8 on:** July 28, 2008, 10:42:50 pm »

Quote from: Espadon on July 28, 2008, 09:12:16 pm

Sure I can but she's not THAT hot [and matching skin texture to the face is gonna be a twat]. I mean I don't think you're into kinda-skinny girls, jgrp.

the interracial marriage topic made him horny.

Sir Jeremy · « **Reply #9 on:** July 28, 2008, 10:50:52 pm »

Haha, ya the 1st one is a win

AND the 2nd One Definantly Big WIn! xD Hot

Mangled* · « **Reply #10 on:** July 28, 2008, 11:57:45 pm »

Wail/Fin

The girl is good.

Hair|Trigger · « **Reply #11 on:** July 29, 2008, 02:41:17 am »

First one I diddnt find funny.Â

As for the chick:Â she looks good and everything but I really dislike your "painting" kind of look.Â I know its probably mostly to do with the re-size but it still looks rough, not realistic.Â (I prefer realistic)

The pose looks retarded :Z
unless she's leaning on something

The lighting on the armour is really cool

Â but are the.. eh.. "breast covering" plates really nessecary?Â I mean come on its not like the military is supposed to be so stylish and all

Can't wait to see te hair finished, because right now it looks really bad and seriousley degrades her face.Â I dont like the green light comming from her shoulder, since there is no light or anything there.Â And her ear does look a bit funny but I diddn't notice much.Â

One thing that bugs me is the skin tone, it could be a little darker (or have less light shining on her face)

but yeah the first ones a definate fail

Edit: you have like 40+ layers.. would you mind outlining why you have so many ? I mean the most I've ever used in an (attempted) drawing was like 5 lol

Espadon · « **Reply #12 on:** July 29, 2008, 07:47:09 am »

I have the background masked on the girl picture, so yeah, she's leaning/sitting on a self-like object [crate?], and yeah, there's green light on the left and a REALLY REALLY BRIGHT WHITE LIGHT to the right kekekekeke^^

As for the "40" layers, ah, I have like 5 layers on her, 5-6 for the background, 4 for some other picture elements and a crapload of messy palette layers I haven't gotten around to combining. Also a lot of layers are bitty overlay lighting adjustments that I didn't want to flatten at the time. Several layers are limb experimentation layers, so I can quickly flip back and forth to see which one I like more, and for some reason I have a backup copy of an older version of her underneath the current layer. Actually there aren't a lot of layers at all, it says "layer 39" but it's not really the 39th layer... just that there was a layer named 38 when I made it. I Ctrl+Shift+N a lot.

Graham · « **Reply #13 on:** July 29, 2008, 09:25:32 am »

Quote from: jrgp on July 28, 2008, 08:22:40 pm

She's hot. Can't you replace that weird master chief suit thing with a bikini?

Pathetic.

a-4-year-old · « **Reply #14 on:** July 29, 2008, 10:31:12 am »

name your layers espadon, its soo much easier to find what you're doing

If I don't name them I get confused by like 6

Yes · « **Reply #15 on:** July 29, 2008, 12:39:13 pm »

Quote from: Dascoo on July 28, 2008, 10:06:24 pm

Espadon, I enjoy your work very much

lol this doesnt seem like the old dascoo or does he?

a-4-year-old · « **Reply #16 on:** July 29, 2008, 12:49:36 pm »

Quote from: Yes on July 29, 2008, 12:39:13 pm

Quote from: Dascoo on July 28, 2008, 10:06:24 pm
Espadon, I enjoy your work very much
lol this doesnt seem like the old dascoo or does he?

no, he always liked hentai

Chuck · « **Reply #17 on:** August 15, 2008, 04:42:23 pm »

Man, the hot girl got moved or deleted, i didnt get to see... lol

Espadon · « **Reply #18 on:** August 18, 2008, 12:20:49 pm »

Holy crap so that's why I didn't delete it already. Sorry, I did a junk sweep for my Photobucket today and must have accidentally taken it off.

I'll post it back up after I fix up some neck issues anyways.

Quote from: a-4-year-old on July 29, 2008, 10:31:12 am

name your layers espadon, its soo much easier to find what you're doing

If I don't name them I get confused by like 6

Yeah but I changed layer thumbs to layer bounds so I can tell visually what I have on the layer.

As you can see I used to name an color-code my layers. It was overkill...

Date Posted: August 15, 2008, 08:36:10 pm

Follow-up: Okay, mecha test win/fail?

Hair|Trigger · « **Reply #19 on:** August 19, 2008, 03:20:55 am »

Horus, lol.Â If im not mistaken thats from some kind of ancient-Egypitian thing?

It looks like a retarded/mutated one-of-those-alien things from Halo

Edit: seeing that thing in your sig close up its really good, but the ground looks kinda bright, and incredibly sketchy

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Author Topic: Win/Fail? (Read 27648 times)