Skyfight

[Ithalimoon]

Hey, Its my first DM map. I've been making ctf and kz maps earlier, so..

Tell me what you think

[homerofgods]

this remind me of ''flåklypa'' I like the mood in this map.

[~Niko~]

reminds me of my earlier maps, too simple structures.

[Blue-ninja]

It's unfortunate, but I don't like this map in general. For a first map, it's actually very decent-looking, but it lacks something in the gameplay and layout value.

1. There's a lot of those deadends on this map, where you can easily get cornered. Standard-wise, if you want to add a deadend to a map, make only one of these.

2. Those huge crates. They're unwieldy, a large obstruction to the flow of the map.

3. The layout does not favor the around-the-circle-ish kind of map you like to see in Deathmatches. It's open-ended on all three sides, and the kits on the left and rightmost sides aren't very good placements. If you put them there, explosions are likely to make them roll off, which is bad.

But I do like the mood of this map, same as homerofgods. Just be sure to lighten the background color JUST a bit next time around.

[Ithalimoon]

It's unfortunate, but I don't like this map in general. For a first map, it's actually very decent-looking, but it lacks something in the gameplay and layout value.

1. There's a lot of those deadends on this map, where you can easily get cornered. Standard-wise, if you want to add a deadend to a map, make only one of these.

2. Those huge crates. They're unwieldy, a large obstruction to the flow of the map.

3. The layout does not favor the around-the-circle-ish kind of map you like to see in Deathmatches. It's open-ended on all three sides, and the kits on the left and rightmost sides aren't very good placements. If you put them there, explosions are likely to make them roll off, which is bad.

But I do like the mood of this map, same as homerofgods. Just be sure to lighten the background color JUST a bit next time around.

Ok thanks for the tips, im making a new ctf map currently, will take advantage of these tips then

[Biggles]

Yeay! looks abit like the maps in worms looking good

[Jakious]

BLUEGANJA. HNS MAP HERE PLZ

[Blue-ninja]

BLUEGANJA. HNS MAP HERE PLZ

Not until said improvements must be made.

[chakapoko maker]

This map has vertical routes, so I tried to move perpendicularly but jet fuel is kinda small and I fall down. The scene is good and I wait for the next map.

[Blacksheepboy]

I could see that is part of an "adventure" map.  This being the treaturous rocks you have to go through to get to a cave/mountain top, or to encrouch upon a valley.