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Offline jettlarue

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Tree made of bottles
« on: March 24, 2009, 09:37:51 pm »
A short poem I just wrote, tell me what you think. I can release the full meaning behind it later if you want (it's not completely related to me). Or maybe it's self explanatory, I don't know, I tried to make it to be able to have multiple meanings as best I could.

Thinking about thinking is making me think,
That maybe I need to keep time for good.
I found the missing link, I mean the telephone.
And I know know that nobody is going to be home,
But I think that that anybody could.
And all these silver spells;
And all these winter shelves;
Still will always wish me well.
Tvs told me to go through all the 30 minute interval hells.
Ringing bells are near, but sounds can't hear.
Take a walk down the alley and find me,
Take the remote control and you'll see.
But the best I can do is remember colors are blind.
Tell me a moment in time.
Tell me, I can dream about the word sunshine.
I think it's time I lost my mind

Offline PANZERCATWAGON

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Re: Tree made of bottles
« Reply #1 on: March 25, 2009, 10:42:31 am »
is it about a widow/widower?

Offline Mangled*

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Re: Tree made of bottles
« Reply #2 on: March 25, 2009, 02:53:07 pm »
That's deep. How old are you?
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Offline Kerrazyeye

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Re: Tree made of bottles
« Reply #3 on: March 25, 2009, 03:24:10 pm »
Its about a television that is sad because its getting obsolete, and nobody will watch him. Duh.

Offline excruciator

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Re: Tree made of bottles
« Reply #4 on: March 25, 2009, 03:26:20 pm »
Now we just need a sick sample to go wid it.
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