It sounds like some nice improvv, the guitar tone clashes with the recording though. it would sound really nice if you had a better microphone or something, not that I should be one to talk. But the playing was really good.
Aaaaand as long as we're going to show off, cough cough
http://llsc.us/members/n00bface/uploads/martyrium2.mp3My recenttt cover of Martyrium, where it's just 4 guitar tracks over each other. I transcribed all of it from an awesome Windir song, so I use it to show off my supreme transcription abilitiesss
and if you've got something that can play .ogg files -
http://llsc.us/members/n00bface/uploads/vreidthingendv.oggLatest cover of Vreid, where I played bass, guitar, drum machine (lolol), and did vocals at the end of it. It's black metal, so most people will think that the vocals are horrid. I did the complete song, but the export of it got lost in a HORRIBLE HORRIBLE FIRE, and so did the project file, so I couldn't redo it. It's not a technical song at all, but it's all haunting and neato. (I don't speak norwegian, so my pronunciation isn't really right.)
Right now I am working on transcribing the Pied Piper, by Lux Occulta, it's a technical death metal song and it's super awesome, it gives me the hornies.
http://llsc.us/members/n00bface/uploads/piedpiperclip.mp3 I recorded that excerpt especially for this topic too!
#Souped up Gibson Flying V, Bareknuckle Warthog pickups in both the neck and bridge
#ENGL Screamer, 50watts tube
#Schecter Stilletto Elite-5 bass, plugged directly into my computer, lolol
#Drumsite, which is a shitty drumming application that isn't free, so I used the trial which doesn't let you save, and just had my computer record all sound that my sound card was producing. GENUIS!
#My voice