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Offline Blacksheepboy

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Finish this sentence:
« on: July 10, 2009, 02:13:04 am »
I thought about dying today, and I came to the conclusion that being sawed in half is quite terrible. But I suppose someone has died peacefully, although dying in such a gruesome manner.

Somehow that led to me writing this half-finished phrase.

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And although he faced the prospect of death, that night he slept as though it were a...

Anyone have a good ending for it -- seems simply ridiculous, aye?
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Offline a-4-year-old

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Re: Finish this sentence:
« Reply #1 on: July 10, 2009, 09:01:46 am »
release from a life which would only be notable in its end.
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Re: Finish this sentence:
« Reply #2 on: July 10, 2009, 01:31:46 pm »
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Offline Lord Frunkamunch

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Re: Finish this sentence:
« Reply #3 on: July 10, 2009, 04:02:53 pm »
too many commas
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Offline Blacksheepboy

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Re: Finish this sentence:
« Reply #4 on: July 10, 2009, 06:11:24 pm »
Yes, one too many.

Offline Mangled*

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Re: Finish this sentence:
« Reply #5 on: July 10, 2009, 06:42:49 pm »
And although he faced the prospect of death, that night he slept as though it were a night where he felt tired enough to sleep regardless of any prospects of death that may or may not be awaiting him in the undefined future.

PS: My God, you're deep.
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Offline Blacksheepboy

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Re: Finish this sentence:
« Reply #6 on: July 10, 2009, 07:52:38 pm »
And although he faced the prospect of death, that night he slept as though it were a night where he felt tired enough to sleep regardless of any prospects of death that may or may not be awaiting him in the undefined future.

Quite the win right here.