very good map for a first map ![Wink ;)](https://static.forums.soldat.pl/Smileys/classic/wink.gif)
For a
first, but don't get cocky
![Tongue :P](https://static.forums.soldat.pl/Smileys/classic/tongue.gif)
This map reminds me of Arena3...
Overall, the map is very open. Lots of room to breath, which isn't all bad. I just see that there's too much. In other words, a DM map needs a balance of tight-quarter areas as well as open atmospheres. I think the ratio would be about 5 parts open: 3 parts close? Someone correct me if I am wrong.
As I have said, you nailed the
openness part, but I think you can afford to bring the right wall closer to the islands, even when disregarding what I said above.