Author Topic: Poem & Rhyme Thread (Read 4646 times)

fulro · « **on:** July 29, 2010, 12:26:38 am »

it say what it say.

My heart pounding like the beat of the drum,
i breathed my breath so hard it become numb
that why my life is on the run
Being chase by a police scums.

DarkCrusade · « **Reply #1 on:** July 29, 2010, 12:30:48 am »

Is it part of your writing style that you forget about grammar?

fulro · « **Reply #2 on:** July 29, 2010, 12:34:00 am »

yes indeed..my writing in english is a low score...y dont u post something without the critize som1 grammar hey dark..just post what u though

DarkCrusade · « **Reply #3 on:** July 29, 2010, 12:51:39 am »

Hey, I just teased you

I didn't say I can write poems or stuff

p0ppin · « **Reply #4 on:** July 29, 2010, 05:29:26 am »

Who needs grammar
when you has a banhammer?

fulro · « **Reply #5 on:** July 29, 2010, 09:06:45 am »

nice one Poppin

{LAW} Gamer_2k4 · « **Reply #6 on:** July 29, 2010, 09:23:38 am »

This is a haiku.
Syllables: Five, seven, five.
It's just that easy!

jerich · « **Reply #7 on:** July 29, 2010, 12:10:20 pm »

Insanity leads to chaos, Then to solitude.
The fruitless effort of adding meaning to what is meaningless.
A lone, crimson tear falls to the sea...
The echo of the remaining star cries out in the infinite vacuum.
The least I can do is send my distant prayers over the wind of time,
setting sail on dreams

fulro · « **Reply #8 on:** July 29, 2010, 12:37:07 pm »

insanity what driven human for it greedy lust
what can an innocent do defend it from wild beast,
hungry and stalking it prey and tear from limp to limb
this insanity and chaos tyrant is the world we live in.

MattH · « **Reply #9 on:** July 29, 2010, 01:08:25 pm »

Fulro... poetry is just not your thing... Sorry, but I think most people here will second my opinion

Mittsu · « **Reply #10 on:** July 29, 2010, 01:40:30 pm »

The shame
even if it's not supposed to be mine
it hurts the same
the painful feeling
of watching another human being
embarass itself
please stop the torture, stop the attempts because i doubt
you're doing something you have any idea about
i'll probably fail to make it sound kind
but if you think its poetry
you must be f**king blind

smiluu · « **Reply #11 on:** July 29, 2010, 03:57:43 pm »

Mercy, mercy please beg do,
Im gonna kill everyone of you,
Scream out loud like a little b***h,
So way to shoot I can know which.

fulro · « **Reply #12 on:** July 29, 2010, 06:08:19 pm »

the shame, the fame,
i dont 'em a dam,
im not here to judge you
just another critize wont stop me
just enjoy would you

Neosano · « **Reply #13 on:** July 29, 2010, 07:57:49 pm »

smiluu has a devil score
Finally, he wont post more! :>

From: July 29, 2010, 08:05:13 pm

If Bill Gates were not that rich
He would be a pedobitch

smiluu · « **Reply #14 on:** July 29, 2010, 08:25:37 pm »

Quote from: Neosano on July 29, 2010, 07:57:49 pm

Finally, he wont post more! :>

What you mean by that?
You feces chucking rat!

Blacksheepboy · « **Reply #15 on:** July 29, 2010, 10:44:54 pm »

Rhyming is silly.
Really.

p0ppin · « **Reply #16 on:** July 30, 2010, 12:07:10 am »

Do slant rhymes still count as a rhyme?
if so, I see what you did there

Pineapples

fulro · « **Reply #17 on:** July 30, 2010, 12:33:49 am »

Don't talk the walk
i put my fist to your trashy word
you see! im just really bore
now run away like sissy boy
next time! dont touch my toy

jrgp · « **Reply #18 on:** July 30, 2010, 12:49:34 am »

My favorites from: http://forums.soldat.pl/index.php?topic=36064.0

Vaginas are fun;
At least to watch, I bet to touch—
But will I ever?
--
Boobies, I like them;
750 gigs
in my collection.
--
Nice asses, I stare.
Feeling them up with my eyes.
My tongue watering.
--
Always sleep in class,
wet dreaming about the chick
in front of me. Yum.
--
Taylor Swift is a
wh*** in the making, for my
fap material.
--
I like her behind
more than coding, high on
arousing caffeine.
--
Everyday, it
slithers in my horny mind --
vengeful libido .
--
Sorry for last night,
I did not mean to break wind
the moment I came
--
Porn is my great savior.
It's the highlight of my days:
Boobs, twats, tits, c**ts, ass.

Neosano · « **Reply #19 on:** July 30, 2010, 06:51:23 am »

Quote from: smiluu on July 29, 2010, 08:25:37 pm

*rhymes here*

And still 666 posts...
f**king soldat ghosts :\
Tell me your secret, master!
Are you admin's dick fapster?

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Author Topic: Poem & Rhyme Thread (Read 4646 times)

DarkCrusade

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