In general, you have the potential to have a fairly good style. On this specific interface gf I would suggest that you...
1) work on some basic form of texture
2)thicken the barrel
3)work on the mag a little more
1) Understood. Work some basic texture start for today
2) If I should know, what's wrong with the barrel?
3) The mag look's weird? Don't worry, I can work the mag little more
Cheers
By the way, G3A3 was fixed. Better now?
Update:
FN FAL