ropw adventure comics(Season 7 is back!)

[freestyler]

I don't like it when a thread is filled with sarcasm, so here you go:
- make the font bigger;
- change the backgrounds to less obtrusive - the characters aren't too visible on those;
- fix your spelling (another "your" where there should be "you're";
- use bigger panels. You keep using the same, small squares that limit your workspace;
- make it more real. I know it's based on a game where you can cast spells, but come on, one just has to raise his hand to set someone else in flames?! And since when is that a reasonable method to tell two people apart?

Suddently, <Santa22> forgot about his revenge on <someone> (sorry, the characters' names aren't too memorable) and just stared at <king> (?) which gave the other two a quest. Then they go to god's cave (which isn't said to be at some significant place - you just walk your usual lawn and a cave pops out) and ask <Slade> to make a miracle and spawn a rock. Or a compass. <someone>, without a second thought, offers his life (what else could sacrifice be?) to make it happen. He's either as blainless and <Santa22> or is a hero and wants to save his realm.

This is bad. Very, very bad. The plot is full of flaws and both art and spelling sucks. And noone knows your friends you met playing ropw. S1 was one of "so bad it's good" comics, but S2 is just plain bad.

[santa22]

well on a note im just coming up with these as i go along. second thats your opion on the graphics other people seem to like them.

[DarkCrusade]

Don't mistake sarcasm with praise..

[Blacksheepboy]

Don't mistake sarcasm with praise..

This.

Want me to spoil the fun and quote everyone who was sarcastic?

And if ever you might be tempted to ragequit the Soldat forums, I have 3 documents to PM you first.

[santa22]

well like i said im not sure how many ill actually make

From: October 07, 2010, 03:28:12 pmstoryline may seem weird...

[Lord Frunkamunch]

dear blacksheep boy

you know that one stereotypical nerd character who is "smart" in the traditional sense but has no sense of social norms? the one who is hellbent on proving to those around him that he is the smartest by pointing out the obvious with big words, even when it is abundantly clear that no one cares and is just waiting for him to shut up? the one who takes every joke for its literal meaning?

you are being that guy.

[santa22]

intersting..........

[Blacksheepboy]

I can't believe my eyes.

[santa22]

I can't believe my eyes.

what now lol

From: October 07, 2010, 11:52:33 pmI may go to a third season now but this one will better then the first 2!

[Blacksheepboy]

dear blacksheep boy

you know that one stereotypical nerd character who is "smart" in the traditional sense but has no sense of social norms? the one who is hellbent on proving to those around him that he is the smartest by pointing out the obvious with big words, even when it is abundantly clear that no one cares and is just waiting for him to shut up? the one who takes every joke for its literal meaning?

you are being that guy.

Alright, I've screwed up and I've been a jackass, I admit it. But how? I laugh at the thought that you think I use big words.

[DarkCrusade]

And if ever you might be tempted to ragequit the Soldat forums, I have 3 documents to PM you first.

Maybe this caught his attention..

[Lord Frunkamunch]

Alright, I've screwed up and I've been a jackass, I admit it. But how? I laugh at the thought that you think I use big words.

that's just part of the archtype. you might not wear horn-rimmed glasses, either, but your inner douche does.

[santa22]

solve your own problems, this is about my comics.

[Blacksheepboy]

that's just part of the archtype. you might not wear horn-rimmed glasses, either, but your inner douche does.

Inner douche? Ah man, I'm sorry, did I hurt your feelings? Man, I apologize...

lol.

[santa22]

that's just part of the archtype. you might not wear horn-rimmed glasses, either, but your inner douche does.

Inner douche? Ah man, I'm sorry, did I hurt your feelings? Man, I apologize...

lol.

Solve your own problems in a PM dude...

From: October 09, 2010, 05:44:58 pmSeason 3 release: Sunday

[DarkCrusade]

Please use this website to find the words you need: Leo - Online Dictionary

And please check twice.. sometimes you use a word for something but it has a completly different meaning.

And a plain is a flat piece of land.

[santa22]

Please use this website to find the words you need: Leo - Online Dictionary

And please check twice.. sometimes you use a word for something but it has a completly different meaning.

And a plain is a flat piece of land.

one thing, i dont have much room sometimes so i have to shorten the words...

[DarkCrusade]

That's why your layout is bad. Different sized panels would do the trick. If you need more room increase the size. It's as easy as that

[santa22]

i have the sprites that i used in all my comics on a sheet so i can add them, and if theres one i dont have i get it from the game. (which is not up anymore)

[edit]
also im really far ahead on the comics, currently working on number 11. but on number 10 is when i started with bigger strips. so much is going on in this season idk how many ill be making.

[DarkCrusade]

I'm afraid you'd rather be better off taking some English lessons instead of proceeding (now) to create comics..