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Re: ropw adventure comics(season 3 PREMIRE!!!)
« Reply #80 on: October 10, 2010, 04:03:32 pm »
sorry im not good at spelling, and sometimes typing.

From: October 12, 2010, 01:46:36 am
trying to keep a good storyline going.
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Re: ropw adventure comics(season 3!)
« Reply #81 on: October 12, 2010, 06:43:29 am »
Why's this guy running into the wrong direction?

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Re: ropw adventure comics(season 3!)
« Reply #82 on: October 12, 2010, 07:31:14 am »

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Re: ropw adventure comics(season 3!)
« Reply #83 on: October 12, 2010, 01:47:49 pm »
Why's this guy running into the wrong direction?
idk what your talking about.

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Re: ropw adventure comics(season 3!)
« Reply #84 on: October 12, 2010, 02:30:20 pm »
Flurryfox shall go to the western part of the realm and runs left. This dude (I cannot remember his name, a major flaw of your story) runs to the southern part. 

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Re: ropw adventure comics(season 3!)
« Reply #85 on: October 12, 2010, 02:33:03 pm »
dude

     North
West     East
     South

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Re: ropw adventure comics(season 3!)
« Reply #86 on: October 12, 2010, 02:38:40 pm »
since when is east always to the right and west always to the left?
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Re: ropw adventure comics(season 3!)
« Reply #87 on: October 12, 2010, 02:58:20 pm »
santa.. assuming the green guy is heading west, the left side must be west, the right part east, the top part north and the bottom part south. The guy is running south.

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Re: ropw adventure comics(season 3!)
« Reply #88 on: October 12, 2010, 03:07:27 pm »
oh i see that flaw now.......

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Re: ropw adventure comics(season 3!)
« Reply #89 on: October 12, 2010, 03:39:18 pm »
oh i see that flaw now.......

Seriously, mate, just give yourself a rest and go back to making comics when you've finished at least a couple of English courses.
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Re: ropw adventure comics(season 3!)
« Reply #90 on: October 12, 2010, 03:43:16 pm »
why.... English is my natural language.... im just not good at spelling at all...

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Re: ropw adventure comics(season 3!)
« Reply #91 on: October 12, 2010, 04:06:42 pm »
Great! Take advantage of your natural knowledge and put more effort in your story. Additionaly, mind that good punctuation makes your text look SO MUCH BETTER.

Those errors just make your comic look like you didn't put much time into it and they disturb the reader so he can't focus on what's actually happening.

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Re: ropw adventure comics(season 3!)
« Reply #92 on: October 12, 2010, 04:38:02 pm »
you're making the comic worse by trying to make it better, these flaws were the charm of it :(
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Re: ropw adventure comics(season 3!)
« Reply #93 on: October 12, 2010, 04:46:44 pm »
sorry if i cant make my comics the exact way you guys want!

From: October 12, 2010, 04:47:10 pm
maybe you would like it better if i had them as cartoons instead <_<

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Re: ropw adventure comics(season 3!)
« Reply #94 on: October 13, 2010, 09:53:05 pm »
what in the name of fuck is this?

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Re: ropw adventure comics(season 3!)
« Reply #95 on: October 14, 2010, 01:59:51 am »
The center panel of S3 E4 is avatar-worthy.

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Re: ropw adventure comics(season 3!)
« Reply #96 on: October 14, 2010, 02:16:33 am »
Oh my god, you made my day ;D

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Re: ropw adventure comics(season 3!)
« Reply #97 on: October 14, 2010, 03:31:15 am »
i noticed that you guys viewed this before i changed it lol

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Re: ropw adventure comics(season 3!)
« Reply #98 on: October 14, 2010, 12:32:56 pm »
that was awesome
I like how that comment doesn't get outdated while the first post is updating.

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Re: ropw adventure comics(season 3!)
« Reply #99 on: October 14, 2010, 01:49:54 pm »
Orava made this for people who'd like to read the comic without interuptions!

Link!